Author: pescetti
Date: Tue May 15 22:38:46 2012
New Revision: 1338926
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1338926&view=rev
Log:
Fix a few typos
Modified:
incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34-1M.html
Modified: incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34-1M.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34-1M.html?rev=1338926&r1=1338925&r2=1338926&view=diff
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--- incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34-1M.html (original)
+++ incubator/ooo/ooo-site/trunk/content/news/aoo34-1M.html Tue May 15 22:38:46
2012
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
<h1>[DRAFT]Apache OpenOffice™ 3.4 Blows Past 1M Downloads</h1>
<p> <strong>After last week's release of Apache OpenOffice 3.4, the project
-is pleased to note that the strong positive reception by users and the press.
+is pleased to note the strong positive reception by users and the press.
Apache OpenOffice 3.4 has been downloaded over one million times</a>.</strong>
</p>
@@ -49,10 +49,9 @@ in the press and social media:</p>
<p>
<ul>
<li>Over 60 press accounts, in at least 12 languages</li>
- <li>The initial announcement from our <a
+ <li>The initial announcement from <a
href="https://twitter.com/#!/apacheoo";>our Twitter account</a> tweet was
re-tweeted 61 times and reached over 43,000 users</li>
- <li>Downloads were 87% for Windows, 11% MacOS and 2% Linux</li>
<li>Additional heavy activity on our
Facebook,Identi.ca and Google+ accounts.</li>
</ul>
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@ in this new release. Also implemented is
now licensed under the Apache License 2 engine.</blockquote>
<p>At <a
-
href="http://www.omgubuntu.co.uk/2012/05/openoffice-3-4-released/";></a>OMG!
+ href="http://www.omgubuntu.co.uk/2012/05/openoffice-3-4-released/";>OMG!
Ubuntu!</a> Joey Sneddon writes: "Apache OpenOffice 3.4 doesn't do
anything
drastic, but does iterate nicely upon that which was there before."</p>
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ development, free from vendor control &m
attract more users and backers.</blockquote>
<p>Iain Thomspon at <a
-
href="http://www.theregister.co.uk/2012/05/08/apache_openoffice_graphics_version/";>The
Register</a> higlighted the "major changes" made to the OpenOffice
+
href="http://www.theregister.co.uk/2012/05/08/apache_openoffice_graphics_version/";>The
Register</a> highlighted the "major changes" made to the OpenOffice
graphics capabilities, mentioning specifically the work of programmer
Armin Le Grand.</p>
