Author: curcuru
Date: Fri May 18 16:22:25 2012
New Revision: 1340153

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1340153&view=rev
Log:
Tweak for clarifications especially for non-committers

Modified:
    incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/website-local.mdtext

Modified: incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/website-local.mdtext
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/website-local.mdtext?rev=1340153&r1=1340152&r2=1340153&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/website-local.mdtext 
(original)
+++ incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/website-local.mdtext Fri May 
18 16:22:25 2012
@@ -16,33 +16,39 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
            specific language governing permissions and limitations
            under the License.
 
+Making updates to the Apache OpenOffice project's websites is simple.  It's 
even easy 
+for non-committers (new contributors - like you) to create a patch to request 
that 
+pages are updated by the project community.
+
+[TOC]
+
 ## Two Websites
 
 The Apache OpenOffice project maintains two websites:
 
-* The [project website](http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/) (from 
which you are viewing this page)
-* The user portal, [www.openoffice.org](http://www.openoffice.org)
+* The [project website](http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/), primarily 
for development and technical information (which you're viewing now)
+* The user portal, [www.openoffice.org](http://www.openoffice.org), primarily 
for end user information and support
 
-Both of these sites use the [Apache Content Management 
System](http://www.apache.org/dev/cms.html) (CMS).
+Both of these sites use the [Apache Content Management 
System](http://www.apache.org/dev/cms.html) (CMS) to manage editing, submitting 
changes, and updating the live websites.
 In essence, regardless of how you make changes to either web area, the changes 
first go
-the staging sites for these areas, respectively --
+the staging sites for these areas, respectively (below), and then are copied 
to the production websites.
 
 * The [project staging site](http://openofficeorg.staging.apache.org/)
 * The [user portal staging site](http://ooo-site.staging.apache.org/)
 
-Additionally, the project website uses 
[Markdown](http://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/) for page contents. 
+Additionally, the project website uses 
[Markdown](http://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/) syntax for page 
contents. 
 The "legacy" OpenOffice.org site uses html.
 
 ## Version Control
 
 We use [Apache Subversion][1] for version control. You can [browse the project 
-repository][2] or [browse the user portal repository][9] in your web browser.
+repository][2] or [browse the user portal repository][9] source files directly 
in your web browser.
 
 
 
-## Making Changes to the Sites
+## How To Make or Request Changes to the Websites
 
-### Using SVN
+### Using SVN Directly (for technical users)
 You can make changes to either site using svn (subversion). This typically 
involves 
 doing an svn checkout, making changes to files and then either committing your 
changes
 if you are an "Apache committer", or submitting a "patch" (an svn "diff" file) 
if you are a contributor but
@@ -53,15 +59,15 @@ patches. (See also, the [SVN Book](http:
 SVN commits will commit your changes to the "staging area". you will need to 
 "publish" your changes to make them active on the "production" site.
 
-### Using the Apache CMS Bookmarklet
+### Using the Apache CMS Bookmarklet (simpler method)
 
 Quick editing of the site is available for committers and contributors using 
the Apache CMS
-[from your browser.][6] If you are a commtter and use the bookmarklet, you 
should use
+[from your browser.][6] If you are a committer and use the bookmarklet in your 
web browser, you should use
 your Apache credentials to log in, make changes and submit them to staging.
-If you are a contributor, and not a committer, you can still use the 
bookmarklet.
-See additional details in the [Apache CMS 
Reference](http://www.apache.org/dev/cmsref.html#non-committer).
+If you are not a committer, you can still use the bookmarklet by signing in to 
the bookmarklet as *anonymous*.
+See detailed how-to steps in the [Apache CMS 
Reference](http://www.apache.org/dev/cmsref.html#non-committer) for 
non-committers.
 
-## Publishing Changes 
+## Publishing Changes to the Production Websites
 
 ### For Committers
 As previously noted, changes you make, either through an svn commit or using 
the CMS GUI tool, 
@@ -83,9 +89,9 @@ section, you will likely be running **pu
 If you are not a committer, you will need
 to follow the procedures for "contributors" in the
 [Developer 
FAQ](http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/developer-faqs.html#im_not_a_committer)
-for getting your changes published by a committer of the project.
+for getting your changes published by a committer of the project, after you 
submit a patch.
 
-## Preparations for Complete Local Development
+## How To Do Website Development Locally (for technical users)
 
 The following information provides instructions on doing website development 
on your local computer.
 These instructions assume you have setup a webserver in your local 
environment. Details are


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