Hi, Dick,
On 6/26/2011 08:14, Dick Groskamp wrote:
[snip]
Created a new patch and attached it to this message
> Index: ppmc-faqs.mdtext.diff
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Openoffice.org/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/ppmc-faqs.mdtext vr jun 24
18:56:53 2011
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Openoffice.org/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/ppmc-faqs.mdtext.fix zo jun 26
13:52:04 2011
+@@ -34,17 +34,17 @@
+
+ The following are conditions to become a committer:
+
+- 1. You have send in patches that were well-respected to improve the software.
++ 1. You have sent in patches that were well-respected to improve the software.
+ 2. You have added documentation to the Wiki or website that were
well-respected to
+- improvent the non-code part of the project.
++ improve the non-code part of the project.
+ 3. You have shown that you can discuss in the mailing lists and that this has
+ brought us forward.
+ 4. You are well known to the established members, who you are and what you
have
+ done in the past. Regarding this project, a former-one or another project.
+
+-If 1 of the 4 statements above are true, then you can be voted in as
committer.
++If 1 of the 4 statements above is true, then you can be voted in as committer.
+
+-When the vote resut is positive, you will be asked for some information to
setup
++When the vote result is positive, you will be asked for some information to
setup
+ your committer status.
+ <br> ([see here for more information][4])
+
+@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@
+
+ The following is a brief summary of what to expect as committer:
+
+- 1. After your (Invividual Contributor Lisence Agreement ([iCLA][5]) has been
++ 1. After your (individual Contributor Lisence Agreement ([iCLA][5]) has been
+ received and registered, you will be invited to specify one or more
preferred
+- Apache user names.
++ Apache usernames.
+
+ **Important**: The e-mail address you provide in your iCLA will be used
for the
+ following communications with you.
+@@ -62,11 +62,11 @@
+ Please note that there is also a [Corporate Contributor Lisence Agreement
+ (CCLA)][6] if you want/have to commit in the name of a company or
organization.
+
+- 2. Choose one or more User Names that would be acceptable to you. These are
short
++ 2. Choose one or more Username(s) that would be acceptable to you. These are
short
+ names or abbriviations that will be used for a Unix account login.
+
+ **Example:** <br>
+- Your name is "John Doe", so an ID cound be "johnd" or "jdoe". [Here you
can see
++ Your name is "John Doe", so an ID could be "johnd" or "jdoe". [Here you
can see
+ if the ID is still free][7] or already given to another committer.
+
+ Supply all other information that is requested. Return the ID requests as
+@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
+ the order you would like to have, so the first one is the most wanted.
+
+ 4. You will receive an e-mail, from "[email protected]", that confirms the
Apache
+- user name for you and also provides you with an initial password. There
are also
++ username for you and also provides you with an initial password. There
are also
+ instructions for changing your password. Please be patient as this mail
can take
+ some days.
+
Thanks for fixing those compound nouns. I'm not sure that the
progression of "user name" to "user-name" to "username" is complete,
but—if it's an Apache convention—I can live with it.
You might also fix "abbrIviations" and "Corporate Contributor LiSenCe
Agreement".
--
/tj/
(Notorious proof-reading nitpicker.)
