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On Nov 15, 2011, at 8:07 PM, Donald Whytock <[email protected]> wrote: > Nice effort put into this. Some grammar-weenie-ings and thoughts... > > -- "including of ones own posts" should be "including of one's own posts". > > -- "Forum operation More-experienced" should be "Forum operation. > More-experienced". > > -- "The Forums embrace all of the descendants of the original > StarOffice/OpenOffice.org that have become siblings in the > OpenOffice.org galaxy. Tips and solutions in the use of one release > are often useful to users of a product cousin having the same > feature." Given descendants and siblings, what is a "cousin"? Is > this a term of art[1]? Does it refer to a branch within OOo, or a > branch outside of OOo such as LO? We've learned that peers is a term that works with LO. I would suggest that or related. This way no one will get hung up on relational distance and who is the black sheep of the family. Regards, Dave > > -- "The OpenOffice.org Community Forums are one way that the Web > connects users of OpenOffice.org-related products. There are > additional communities across the Internet with similar concerns as > well as different specialties. These can employ mailing lists, > Internet news groups, and other web-based forums. The Web and search > engines bring the different resources of these communities into the > reach of each other and users everywhere. The OpenOffice.org > Community Forums are now continuing as a substantial resource of that > extended community." Not sure this paragraph is as useful as a > statement that URLs have been preserved to keep existing search-engine > repositories useful, which the next two paragraphs come close to > saying. On the other hand, it might look good on a "Where to Get > Help" page on the site. > > -- Closing paragraph? Something along the lines of, "See? Wasn't > that cool?" Or alternately, "Y'all come!" > > Don > > [1] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Term_of_art
