On Sun, Jul 09, 2006 at 07:15:48AM -0400, Timothy Miller wrote:
> On 7/8/06, Jack Carroll <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > I guess I'd ask who the intended audience is. This write-up is
> >highly technical. I think it would be over the heads of people who just
> >want to know that the Open Graphics Project is under way, and get a sense
> >of
> >how much progress it's made. The write-up seems to give most of its space
> >to a basic explanation of what a video board does, which would probably be
> >of more interest to someone wanting to design one or configure one.
>
> So, to either I should assume a technical audience who knows about
> video, or I should assume laymen. This article tries to span too much
> of a gap in too short of a space.
>
> I'm just trying to get press here. :)
The only suggestion I can make is, figure out who the readers will
be, and address them.
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