On Saturday 12 January 2008 00:30:50 Michael Meeuwisse wrote: > They look both good to me, although you might want to drop "OGP" in > this one as an example of Open Hardware. Something like; ...use the > term "Open Hardware" see the light, like the Open Graphics Project.
I thought about it (for about ten seconds, since I had two minutes left :-)) but decided to keep it out of the abstract. I'll definitely mention it in the paper and the presentation though. > I > also think you could do with less commas. Maybe that whole first > sentence should be something like; > In recent years we have seen a multitude of projects and products > that use the term "Open Hardware" see the light like the Open > Graphics Project. > If the "even before that" is important enough to mention, make the > start of the sentence "In the last decade" or "Over the years". Removed it. I also simplified the first sentence according to Dieter's suggestion. They're in, and the deadline has passed, so here we are. Now to write the papers. But not today :-). Lourens
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