Please find attached a patch against current master for the "exporting
MARC records" sections. This patch fixes the example SQL query and
includes a few grammatical fixes / markup changes in passing.
>From e9b57836f8e5ca2401fb692ca4a9e9584e2e1cfa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan Scott <[email protected]>
Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2011 06:48:11 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos and grammatical errors in "exporting MARC"

There were two significant typos in the example SQL for exporting a list
of MARC record IDs. In passing, adjust some verb conjugations, wrap
"marc_export" in a <command> element, and use uppercase "ID" where
appropriate to distinguish from the id/ego thing.

Signed-off-by: Dan Scott <[email protected]>
---
 1.6/admin/migratingdata_1.6.xml |   20 ++++++++++----------
 2.0/admin/migratingdata_2.0.xml |   20 ++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1.6/admin/migratingdata_1.6.xml b/1.6/admin/migratingdata_1.6.xml
index a443dfe..7fb2482 100644
--- a/1.6/admin/migratingdata_1.6.xml
+++ b/1.6/admin/migratingdata_1.6.xml
@@ -690,17 +690,17 @@ COMMIT;
        <section xml:id="exportingbibrecordsintoMARC">
                <title>Exporting Bibliographic Records into MARC files</title>
                <indexterm><primary>migrating</primary><secondary>exporting 
bibliographic records</secondary><tertiary>MARC</tertiary></indexterm>
-               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the marc_export support script. All 
steps should be performed by the 
+               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the <command>marc_export</command> 
support script. All steps should be performed by the
                opensrf user from your Evergreen server.</para>
                <procedure>
-                       <step> 
-                               <para>Create a text file list of the 
Bibliographic record ids you would like to export from Evergreen. One way to do 
this is using SQL:</para>
+                       <step>
+                               <para>Create a text file list of the 
Bibliographic record IDs you would like to export from Evergreen. One way to do 
this is using SQL:</para>
 <programlisting language="sql">
 SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
-       JOIN asset.call_number AS acn ON acn.record-bre.id 
-       WHERE bre.deleted='false' and ownling_lib=101 \g 
/home/opensrf/records.txt;
+       JOIN asset.call_number AS acn ON acn.record = bre.id
+       WHERE bre.deleted='false' and owning_lib=101 \g 
/home/opensrf/records.txt;
 </programlisting>
-                               <para>This query will create a file called 
<filename>records.txt</filename> containing a column of distinct ids of items 
owned by the organizational unit with the 
+                               <para>This query creates a file called 
<filename>records.txt</filename> containing a column of distinct IDs of items 
owned by the organizational unit with the
                                <database class="field">id</database> 
<literal>101</literal>.</para>
                        </step>
                        <step>
@@ -710,13 +710,13 @@ SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
 </screen>
                        </step>
                        <step>
-                               <para>Run <command>marc_export</command>, using 
the id file you created in step 1 to define which files to export.</para>
+                               <para>Run <command>marc_export</command>, using 
the ID file you created in step 1 to define which files to export.</para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>cat /home/opensrf/records.txt | ./marc_export -i -c 
/openils/conf/opensrf_core.xml \
 -x /openils/conf/fm_IDL.xml -f XML --timeout 5 > exported_files.xml
 </userinput>
 </screen>
-                               <para>The example above export the records into 
MARCXML format.</para>
+                               <para>The example above exports the records 
into MARCXML format.</para>
                                <note>
                                <para>For help or for more options when running 
<command>marc_export</command>, run <command>marc_export</command> with the 
<option>-h</option> option:</para>
 <screen>
@@ -726,8 +726,8 @@ SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
                                
                        </step>
                                <note>
-                               <para>Processing time for exporting records 
will depond on several factors such as the number of records you are exporting. 
It is recommended that you divide the 
-                               export id files 
(<filename>records.txt</filename>) into manageable number of records if you are 
exporting a large number of records.</para> 
+                               <para>Processing time for exporting records 
depends on several factors such as the number of records you are exporting. It 
is recommended that you divide the
+                               export ID files 
(<filename>records.txt</filename>) into a manageable number of records if you 
are exporting a large number of records.</para>
                                </note>
                </procedure>
        </section>      
diff --git a/2.0/admin/migratingdata_2.0.xml b/2.0/admin/migratingdata_2.0.xml
index cf8ce7c..9e29586 100644
--- a/2.0/admin/migratingdata_2.0.xml
+++ b/2.0/admin/migratingdata_2.0.xml
@@ -669,17 +669,17 @@ COMMIT;
        <section xml:id="exportingbibrecordsintoMARC">
                <title>Exporting Bibliographic Records into MARC files</title>
                <indexterm><primary>migrating</primary><secondary>exporting 
bibliographic records</secondary><tertiary>MARC</tertiary></indexterm>
-               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the marc_export support script. All 
steps should be performed by the 
+               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the <command>marc_export</command> 
support script. All steps should be performed by the
                opensrf user from your Evergreen server.</para>
                <procedure>
                        <step> 
-                               <para>Create a text file list of the 
Bibliographic record ids you would like to export from Evergreen. One way to do 
this is using SQL:</para>
+                               <para>Create a text file list of the 
Bibliographic record IDs you would like to export from Evergreen. One way to do 
this is using SQL:</para>
 <programlisting language="sql">
 SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
-       JOIN asset.call_number AS acn ON acn.record-bre.id 
-       WHERE bre.deleted='false' and ownling_lib=101 \g 
/home/opensrf/records.txt;
+       JOIN asset.call_number AS acn ON acn.record = bre.id
+       WHERE bre.deleted='false' and owning_lib=101 \g 
/home/opensrf/records.txt;
 </programlisting>
-                               <para>This query will create a file called 
<filename>records.txt</filename> containing a column of distinct ids of items 
owned by the organizational unit with the 
+                               <para>This query creates a file called 
<filename>records.txt</filename> containing a column of distinct IDs of items 
owned by the organizational unit with the
                                <database class="field">id</database> 
<literal>101</literal>.</para>
                        </step>
                        <step>
@@ -689,13 +689,13 @@ SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
 </screen>
                        </step>
                        <step>
-                               <para>Run <command>marc_export</command>, using 
the id file you created in step 1 to define which files to export.</para>
+                               <para>Run <command>marc_export</command>, using 
the ID file you created in step 1 to define which files to export.</para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>cat /home/opensrf/records.txt | ./marc_export -i -c 
/openils/conf/opensrf_core.xml \
 -x /openils/conf/fm_IDL.xml -f XML --timeout 5 > exported_files.xml
 </userinput>
 </screen>
-                               <para>The example above export the records into 
MARCXML format.</para>
+                               <para>The example above exports the records 
into MARCXML format.</para>
                                <note>
                                <para>For help or for more options when running 
<command>marc_export</command>, run <command>marc_export</command> with the 
<option>-h</option> option:</para>
 <screen>
@@ -705,15 +705,15 @@ SELECT DISTINCT bre.id FROM biblio.record_entry AS bre
                                
                        </step>
                                <note>
-                               <para>Processing time for exporting records 
will depond on several factors such as the number of records you are exporting. 
It is recommended that you divide the 
-                               export id files 
(<filename>records.txt</filename>) into manageable number of records if you are 
exporting a large number of records.</para> 
+                               <para>Processing time for exporting records 
depends on several factors such as the number of records you are exporting. It 
is recommended that you divide the
+                               export ID files 
(<filename>records.txt</filename>) into a manageable number of records if you 
are exporting a large number of records.</para>
                                </note>
                </procedure>
        </section>      
        <section xml:id="importingauthorityrecords">
                <title>Importing Authority Records</title>
                <indexterm><primary>migrating</primary><secondary>importing 
authority records</secondary></indexterm>
-               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the marc_export support script. All 
steps should be performed by the 
+               <para>The following procedure explains how to export Evergreen 
bibliographic records into MARC files using the <command>marc_export</command> 
support script. All steps should be performed by the 
                opensrf user from your Evergreen server.</para>
                <simplesect>
                        <title>Importing Authority Records from Command 
Line</title>
-- 
1.7.6.2

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