Review: Needs Fixing Glad to see my 5 minute written quickly "About" is getting some needed improvements :)
Line 43: veriety Line 44: attractvie Line 51: Change "even on" to "including?" (yes I know I'm correcting my own text here!) Line 54: Why have you changed "beaten" to "beat"? Or is this a UK/US difference in language? Line 79/80. Too many want's. Change the second to 'would like' perhaps? And 94/95 -- https://code.launchpad.net/~wesleystout/openlp/documentation/+merge/55740 Your team OpenLP Core is subscribed to branch lp:openlp. _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~openlp-core Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~openlp-core More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
