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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Thomas Lotterer
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-re                       Date:   11-Nov-2004 08:21:36
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2004111107213600

  Modified files:
    openpkg-re              releasenotes.txt

  Log:
    minor documentation cosmetics

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.12        +7  -7      openpkg-re/releasenotes.txt
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-re/releasenotes.txt
  ============================================================================
  $ cvs diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12 releasenotes.txt
  --- openpkg-re/releasenotes.txt       20 Oct 2004 11:43:10 -0000      1.11
  +++ openpkg-re/releasenotes.txt       11 Nov 2004 07:21:36 -0000      1.12
  @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
     OpenPKG Release Notes
     =====================
   
  -  o $Revision: 1.11 $. The most recent update of this file can be
  +  o $Revision: 1.12 $. The most recent update of this file can be
       downloaded from http://cvs.openpkg.org/openpkg-re/releasenotes.txt
       The history of this document, specific versions and
       differences between versions can be retrieved from
  @@ -505,9 +505,9 @@
           UUID_INSTANCE="db1733cb-b4f1-3d40-9b6b-0eb4dfec965b"
           UUID_PLATFORM="61a4580d-b45c-388f-a9b9-9887780a8b2d"
   
  -    The three UUIDs can be used to uniqely and ultimately identify a
  -    OpenPKG instance. Currently OpenPKG does not use this information
  -    unless you explictly tell it to do so. It provides the information
  +    The three UUIDs can be used to uniqely and ultimately identify an
  +    OpenPKG instance. Currently OpenPKG does not use this information.
  +    It provides the information
       to enable additional services and functionality in the future. A
       typical application is to use the UUIDs as the key to identify an
       instance in a enterprise software inventory.
  @@ -533,11 +533,11 @@
       startup (rc.openpkg %start) and daily (rc.openpkg %daily). Can be
       used to detect relocated instances or instances on mobile platforms.
   
  -    We understand that the provisioning of UUIDs is not welcome by
  -    everybody. People tend to be afraid
  +    We understand not everybody welcomes the provisioning of UUIDs.
  +    People tend to be afraid
   
       - which data is used to create the UUID
  -    - where it is send to
  +    - where is it send to
       - how much privacy is exposed to the recipient
   
       We provide a way for the user to reproduce how the UUIDs are
  @@ .
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