OpenPKG CVS Repository
http://www.openpkg.org/cvsweb/cvsweb.cgi
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Server: cvs.openpkg.org Name: Michael Schloh
Root: /e/openpkg/cvs Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Module: openpkg-web Date: 28-Aug-2002 16:05:30
Branch: HEAD Handle: 2002082815053000
Modified files:
openpkg-web/press PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt
Log:
Beginning corrections and improvements.
Summary:
Revision Changes Path
1.4 +8 -8 openpkg-web/press/PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt
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Index: openpkg-web/press/PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt
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$ cvs diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt
--- openpkg-web/press/PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt 28 Aug 2002 12:04:52 -0000 1.3
+++ openpkg-web/press/PR-002-openpkg-1.1.txt 28 Aug 2002 14:05:30 -0000 1.4
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE - 29-Aug-2002
- OpenPKG project releases version 1.1 of their
+ The OpenPKG project releases version 1.1 of their
unique cross-platform software packaging facility.
http://www.openpkg.org/ -- Munich, DE -- August 29, 2002 -- The OpenPKG
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
previously burdened by non-conformant systems. OpenPKG leverages
proven technologies like Red Hat Package Manager (RPM) and provides an
additional system layer on top of the operating system. With OpenPKG, a
-new and unique method of software deployment took form.
+new and unique method of software deployment is taking form.
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@@ -58,14 +58,14 @@
HIGHLIGHTS OF OPENPKG
-* Based on Open Source technologies.
+* Based on Open Source technology.
* Portable across all major Unix platforms.
* Official support for FreeBSD, RedHat, Debian and Solaris
* Minimum operating system intrusion.
* Minimum overhead in software packaging.
* Easy installation, updating and uninstallation of packages.
* Over 270 software packages available.
-* Bundled with useful package pre-configurations.
+* Bundled with useful package preconfigurations.
* Support for multiple system instances.
* Abstracted run-command facility.
@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@
OpenPKG is a software packaging facility for Unix computers, and
targets the major server platforms. Solaris, Linux, and FreeBSD are
-fully supported. NetBSD, OpenBSD, Tru64, HP/UX and others were tested
-successfully. While internally based on RPM version 4, OpenPKG is a
+fully supported, and NetBSD, OpenBSD, Tru64, HP/UX and others are
+unofficially supported. While internally based on RPM version 4, OpenPKG is a
self-contained system with minimal dependencies (no RPM preinstallation
-required), and installs itself by means of a tricky bootstrapping
+is required) and installs itself by means of a tricky bootstrapping
procedure. OpenPKG eases and controls the management of a large or
diverse base of software across one or more of its supported platforms.
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
technology in production use. It is maintained and improved by its
original developers and contributors from the Open Source community.
OpenPKG is the brainchild of Ralf S. Engelschall, team leader of
-Development and principal author of a number of other widely used
+development and principal author of a number of other widely used
technologies like Apache SSL/TLS Engine (mod_ssl), Apache URL Rewriting
Engine (mod_rewrite), GNU Portable Threads (Pth), GNU Portable Shell
Tool (Shtool), and Website META Language (WML).
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