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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Thomas Lotterer
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-web                      Date:   07-Aug-2003 16:17:18
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2003080715171800

  Modified files:
    openpkg-web             facts.wml

  Log:
    update, correct and spell check facts

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.9         +24 -22     openpkg-web/facts.wml
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-web/facts.wml
  ============================================================================
  $ cvs diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9 facts.wml
  --- openpkg-web/facts.wml     2 Apr 2003 10:04:35 -0000       1.8
  +++ openpkg-web/facts.wml     7 Aug 2003 14:17:18 -0000       1.9
  @@ -41,9 +41,9 @@
   <p>
   <li><b>Cross platform</b>
       <br>
  -    OpenPKG supports FreeBSD, Linux and Solaris, it runs on Intel and Sparc
  -    CPUs.  On any system the behaviour of OpenPKG is the same so engineers
  -    using it will see a unified environment accross these platforms. This
  +    OpenPKG supports FreeBSD, Linux and Solaris, it runs on Intel, Sparc and Alpha
  +    CPUs.  On any system the behavior of OpenPKG is the same so engineers
  +    using it will see a unified environment across these platforms. This
       significantly reduces the complexities normally resulting from dissimilar
       systems. Have your engineers do application configuration rather than
       wasting time finding the differences between systems.
  @@ -67,13 +67,13 @@
       Officially released OpenPKG packages are digitally signed. Verification of
       that sign makes any tampering on packages evident. Successful verification
       assures that any package you grabbed came from a trusted source and
  -    includes the content you expect without any damage or suprises inside.
  +    includes the content you expect without any damage or surprises inside.
   <p>
   <li><b>Package integrity verification</b>
       <br>
       Files from already installed packages can be compared against the original
       package's content. Check system integrity any time you like. Ensure your
  -    last filesystem check did not damage your executeables.
  +    last filesystem check did not damage any executable.
   <p>
   <li><b>Self contained Packages</b>
       <br>
  @@ -95,33 +95,35 @@
       prefix this was our internal design decision. OpenPKG does not enforce
       this prefix.  It can be configured when bootstrapping. If you choose a
       different path you must build your binaries yourself which is just a
  -    matter of CPU horsepower provided you have the source RPMs.
  +    matter of CPU horsepower and source RPM download speed.
   <p>
   <li><b>Multiple instances</b>
       <br>
       Isolating multiple installations and creating virtual servers is a snap.
       Just bootstrap OpenPKG to more than one location. We already got all the
  -    tweaks and quirks out of many packages. Assume network daemons will
  +    tweaks and quirks out of the packages. Assume network daemons will
       properly listen to configured not wildcard addresses and applications log
       to their own not to the common system <i>var</i> area.
   <p>
   <li><b>Minimal OS intrusion</b>
       <br>
  -    OpenPKG tries to not touch the operating system at all. Only very few
  -    adjustments are being done related to system startup and shutdown (rc) and
  -    periodic execution of commands (cron)
  +    OpenPKG tries to not touch the operating system at all. Only very
  +    few adjustments are being done related to user/group accounts,
  +    system startup and shutdown (rc) and periodic execution of commands
  +    (cron).
   <p>
   <li><b>Useful preconfiguration</b>
       <br>
  -    Package installations yield useful preconfigurations which allow immediate
  -    exploration or usage of an application.
  +    Package installations yield useful preconfigurations which allow
  +    immediate exploration or usage of an application while avoiding
  +    unnecessary security threats.
   <p>
   <li><b>Uninstallable packages</b>
       <br>
       A OpenPKG package can be removed entirely from the system. Every static
  -    content is removed automtically while variable data like confiuration and
  -    logs survive deinstallation. They can be the base of an upgrade or can be
  -    removed.  Locating them is easy due to the clean filesystem structure that
  +    content is removed automatically while variable user data like configuration and
  +    databases survive deinstallation. 
  +    Locating user data is easy due to the clean filesystem structure that
       OpenPKG enforces.
   <p>
   <li><b>Powerful queries</b>
  @@ -129,14 +131,14 @@
       RPM already provides powerful query mechanisms allowing insight view to
       any package, list everything from textual description down to the
       attributes of a single file. Never again be in doubt what the original
  -    permissons of the file you just accidently touched have been. OpenPKG has
  -    been desingend to provide as many useful informations as query results as
  +    permissions of the file you just accidentally touched have been. OpenPKG has
  +    been designed to provide as many useful informations as query results as
       possible.
   <p>
   <li><b>Run-command facility</b>
       <br>
       The run-command facility makes it easy to enable or disable, run, stop,
  -    restart or reload daemons. Best of all, it works consistant across all
  +    restart or reload daemons. Best of all, it works consistent across all
       platforms.
   </ul>
   
  @@ -156,7 +158,7 @@
   <li><b>Open source software</b>
       <br>
       OpenPKG is open source software. In the (unlikely) event you push it to
  -    the limits, have exhausted any documention or suspect you found a bug you
  +    the limits, have exhausted any documentation or suspect you found a bug you
       have full access to the source. This allows you to have an in-depth view
       behind the scenes and we won't stop you if you proceed and tailor OpenPKG
       to your needs.
  @@ -167,14 +169,14 @@
   <p>
   <li><b>Dependencies for build and runtime</b>
       <br>
  -    Source package include information for build-dependencies and binary
  -    packages include information for runtime- (aka install-) dependencies.
  +    Source package include information for build dependencies and binary
  +    packages include information for install dependencies.
   <p>
   <li><b>Clean and compact package specifications</b>
       <br>
       The one single <code>.spec</code> file is the ultimate source for any
       information regarding the package from user viewable description over
  -    compiler options to install targes. It's all there.
  +    compiler options to install targets. It's all there.
   <p>
   <li><b>Run-command facility</b>
       <br>
  @@ .
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