Am Montag 20 Dezember 2010, 23:25:43 schrieb Helen: > Ok I've no idea what to write about Factory, Tumbleweed and Evergreen, > and I'm not too sure about Mobile either. I need someone to at least > find some key points to focus on for these. Searches aren't giving me > much to work with so I need SOMEONE WHO KNOWS to write some ideas.
Factory - be part of development . Help us test the next version of openSUSE, thats also a rolling release, there are snapshots the Milestones. Here is the main point to bring them to use it, it helps us with debugging. Tumbleweed - rolling release, no bigger update needed, software always up to date. Always the newest stuff. Evergreen - server variante with longer support, so far I see they plan for 3 years now. Make that as the last one until they are sure with it. Ideal for develop on it for smaller companies, ideal also for hoster. Think u can play with "The rain in spain" from My fair Lady -(It "greens" so green when Spain's blossoms bloom) in that text. Maybe headline like "Evergreen - It greens so green..." hope it helps a little bit br gnokii > > Note that this is really an advertising pitch, NOT documentation - it > doesn't have to have everything, just key fun facts or useful things > to catch the reader's attention and make them want to know more. > > Please, if you know anything at all take ten minutes to jot down a few > ideas. These texts need to be finished so that the posters can be > ready in plenty of time for the conferences early the New Year. > > > thanks > > Helen > > http://piratepad.net/VQM25U4GMy > > On Mon, Dec 20, 2010 at 8:10 PM, Jos Poortvliet <[email protected]> wrote: > > On Friday 17 December 2010 05:35:57 Helen wrote: > >> I made some reasonable progress with the text today, organized them so > >> they are in the order of the examples as posted by Gnokki, with > >> headline, topic (for reference) and text below. > >> > >> If someone could write something about Factory please? I'm clueless > >> about that. Also Gnokii I wasn't sure what the topic of the people one > >> was, I thought 'international' but not sure. > >> > >> Also, I'm not too sure about a couple of the last images. > >> > >> I also need someone to check the Yast text, it's not quite complete > >> and I'm not sure what else to say abou that. > >> > >> Some of the texts might seem a bit too short, in terms of not saying > >> enough about the features, but we do need to keep them fairly brief I > >> think. > >> > >> If you think I need to talk about something else, please add it and > >> I'll try to work it in. > >> > >> Also please comment if you think any of the phrases need improvement, > >> suggest alternatives, or if facts need correcting! > >> > >> http://piratepad.net/VQM25U4GMy > > > > Awesome work. The ones that are left are a bit difficult, I couldn't > > really add much. Anyone who wants to try, add any thoughts you have on > > the items on the bottom which have no text yet - any ideas could be > > helpful so don't be afraid to add whatever comes up in your mind :D > > > >> thanks > >> > >> Helen -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
