> Hi OpenVAS team,
>
> I drafted a announcment for the (upcoming) 10000th NVT.
> Any comments, suggestions?
Just some grammar suggestions.
> Best
>
> Jan
>
>
> OpenVAS now beyond 10000 Network Vulnerability Tests
>
> Passing the 10.000th Network Vulnerability Test (NVT) is a perfect
> occasion to report about the progress of the OpenVAS project[1].
>
> In October 2008 the systematic development of new NVTs
> started with a base of around 5800 Tests. With the release
> of OpenVAS 2.0 in December 2008, the development was boosted
> and reached now an average of 10 code updates per day.
..and has now reached...
> The public OpenVAS NVT Feed Service delivers 3-10 new vulnerability
> tests every day.
>
> The significantly grown and globally distributed developer team
> will gather on the second OpenVAS developers conference[2] July 9-12 2009
..gather at the...
> in Germany. During the conference features and roadmap for OpenVAS 3.0
..and a roadmap...
> will be scheduled.
>
> The OpenVAS project is directly backed up and also supplemented with
I think "backed up" should just be "backed", as in the phrase "directly
backed by". "backed up" makes me think of backing up data.
This is quite a long sentence. Maybe the it should be separated into two
sentences?
The OpenVAS project is backed by xxx. A number of companies also
supplement the project with professional services, namely yyy.
or something like
The OpenVAS project is backed by a number of companies, which also
supplement the project with professional services. These companies
include xxx.
> professional services[3] by a number of companies, namely Greenbone Networks,
> SecPod, Intevation and SecuritySpace.
> "Reaching the professional enterprise market is a good indicator that
> OpenVAS gained maturity very fast" says Tim Brown, founder of the
> OpenVAS project.
>
> While OpenVAS 3.0 will likely appear already in 2009, users of OpenVAS 1.0
I think "already" is out of place or the wrong choice of word. It could
just read "will likely appear in 2009". Maybe I'm nitpicking.
> should prepare to migrate as support for 1.0 will end during 2009.
>
> [1] www.openvas.org
> [2] www.openvas.org/openvas-devcon2.html
> [3] www.openvas.org/professional-services.html
>
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