Hi,
Not a thorough proof read, but some comments:
Support for providing IPv6 DNS servers
> - A new DHCP sub-options ``DNS6`` is added alongside with the already
> existing
> - ``DNS`` sub-option. This is used to provide DNS resolvers available
> over
> - IPv6. This will be pushed to clients and `` --up`` scripts and
> ``--plugin``
> - can act upon it through the ``foreign_option_<n>`` environment
> variables.
> + A new DHCP sub-option ``DNS6`` is added alongside with the already
> existing
> + ``DNS`` sub-option. This is used to provide DNS resolvers available
> over
> + IPv6. This will be pushed to clients and `` --up`` scripts and
> ``--plugin``
>
This option could be in the client config or pushed from the server, so
"This may be pushed to clients ...." would be better?
+ can act upon it through the ``foreign_option_<n>`` environment
> variables.
>
> - Support for the Windows client picking up this new sub-option is
> added,
> - however IPv6 DNS resolvers needs to be configured via ``netsh``
> which requires
> - administrator privileges if the new interactive services on Windows
> is not
> - being used. If the interactive services is used, this service will
> execute
> - ``netsh`` in the background with the proper privileges.
> + Support for the Windows client picking up this new sub-option is
> added,
> + however IPv6 DNS resolvers need to be configured via ``netsh`` which
> requires
> + administrator privileges if the new interactive services on Windows
> is not
>
if ... not --> unless (?)
services -> service
> + being used. If the interactive services is used, this service will
> execute
>
services -> service
>
>
> -- With OpenVPN v2.4, the project have moved over to depend on and
> actively use
> +- With OpenVPN v2.4, the project has moved over to depend on and actively
> use
> the official C99 standard (-std=c99). This may on some older
> compiler/libc
> - headers combinations fail. On most of these situations it is
> recommended to
> + header combinations fail.
Move "fail" up:
"This may fail on some older compiler/libc header combinations."
Selva
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