On 23/09/2020 14:58, Jan Seeger wrote:
> --- a/doc/man-sections/script-options.rst
> +++ b/doc/man-sections/script-options.rst
> @@ -709,10 +709,10 @@ instances.
> A set of variables which define each IPv6 route to be added, and are
> set prior to **--up** script execution.
>
> - ``parm`` will be one of :code:`network` or :code:`gateway`
> + ``parm`` will be one of :code:`network`, :code:`gateway`
> (:code:`netmask` is contained as :code:`/nnn` in the
> ``route_ipv6_network_{n}``, unlike IPv4 where it is passed in a
> - separate environment variable).
> + separate environment variable) or :code:`metric`.
I would suggest to rewrite this slightly, to make it clearer. The () sentence
should be incorporated as a normal sentence.
So the (text/plain) result will be something like:
param will be one of network, code or metric. The netmask is contained
as /nnn in the route_ipv6_network_{n}, unlike IPv4 where it is passed in
a separate environment variable.
Or maybe even (why do we highlight IPv4 differences so much?):
param will be one of network, code or metric. The netmask is
not provided and is preserved as /nnn in the IPv6 range in
route_ipv6_network_{n}.
(These examples needs the proper :code:`value` and ``value`` highlighting,
removed here for clarity)
--
kind regards,
David Sommerseth
OpenVPN Inc
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