Benoit,
Thank you for the comments.

I'm not sure I understand the need to change the ifCapStackMIB MODULE-IDENTITY 
value.
It has been allocated by IANA as { mib-2 166 } in RFC 5066.

Since we did not change the name (or the content) it should stay with the same 
OID, similar say to MAU-MIB - the last version is defined in RFC 4836, where 
mauMod MODULE-IDENTITY is { mib-2 26 6 }, exactly the same as mauMod 
MODULE-IDENTITY in the RFCs it obsoleted, such as RFC 3636, RFC 2668 and RFC 
2239.

Regards,
-E.

From: Benoit Claise [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Wednesday, January 02, 2013 16:14
To: Edward Beili
Cc: [email protected]
Subject: draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-00.txt review

Ed,

Here is my draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis-00.txt review


1.
OLD

  -- EdNote: Replace XXXX with the actual RFC number &

   -- remove this note



       ::= { mib-2 166 }
NEW

  -- EdNote: Replace XXXX with the actual RFC number &

   -- remove this note



       ::= { mib-2 XXXX }

Consequently, the IANA considerations section need to be changed/

7.  IANA Considerations



   Object identifier 166 for the ifCapStackMIB MODULE-IDENTITY have been

   allocated by IANA in the MIB-2 sub-tree.
2.

I don't believe that you need the following REVISION

       REVISION    "200711070000Z"  -- November 07, 2007

       DESCRIPTION "Initial version, published as RFC 5066."

Editorial
1.
OLD

Abstract



   This document defines Management Information Base (MIB) module for

   use with network management protocols in TCP/IP-based internets.
NEW

Abstract



   This document defines a Management Information Base (MIB) module for

   use with network management protocols in TCP/IP-based internets.
2.
OLD

   In addition the Security Considerations section was updated to





NEW

   In addition, the Security Considerations section was updated to







Regards, Benoit (as a contributor)
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