Dear authors,

The CAPWAP Data channel carries the IEEE 802.11
   management traffic (like IEEE 802.11 Action Frames).  The station's
   data frames are locally bridged, i.e., not carried over the CAPWAP
   data channel.  The station's data frames are handled by the Access
   Router.

Data Channel, Data channel, data channel. Be consistent

That was one source of confusion (had to re-read the text)
Later on, I see

   As shown in the figure there is still a CAPWAP control and
   data channel between the WTP and AC, wherein the CAPWAP data channel
   carries the stations' management traffic.

That's the point, the figures 1 and 2 don't show the CAPWAP control and data channels.
The figures would benefit from something like this

                       Locally Bridged
               +-----+ Data Frames      +----------------+
               | WTP |==================|  Access Router |
               +-----+\\                +----------------+
                       \\
                        \\
                         \\ CAPWAP Control Channel: +--------+
                         ++=========================+   AC   |
                         // CAPWAP Data Channel:    +--------+
                        //  IEEE 802.11 management traffic
                       //
               +-----+//                +----------------+
               | WTP |==================|  Access Router |
               +=====+ Locally Bridged  +----------------+
                       Data Frames
            Figure 1: Centralized Control with Distributed Data

And as bonus points, a figure before that, to explain how CAPWAP works without local briding

               +-----+
               | WTP |
               +-----+\\
                       \\
                        \\
                         \\ CAPWAP Control Channel: +--------+
                         ++=========================+   AC   |
                         // CAPWAP Data Channel:    +--------+
                        //  - IEEE 802.11 management traffic
                       //   - Data Frames
               +-----+//
               | WTP |
               +=====+
- Terminology
1. OLD:

   Wireless Termination Point (WTP), The physical or network entity that
   contains an RF antenna and wireless Physical Layer (PHY) to transmit
   and receive station traffic for wireless access networks.


NEW
   Wireless Termination Point (WTP): The physical or network entity that
   contains an RF antenna and wireless Physical Layer (PHY) to transmit
   and receive station traffic for wireless access networks.

2. I guess that the definitions comes from the CAPWAP RFCs. You might want to 
provide references

3.  CAPWAP Data Channel: A bi-directional flow defined by the AC IP
   Address, WTP IP Address, AC data port, WTP data port, and the
   transport-layer protocol (UDP or UDP-Lite) over which CAPWAP Data
   packets are sent and received.

Well, if the mode is local bridging, not quite :-)


-
               +-+-+-+-+-+-+                                  |
               | Tunnel    |                                  |
               | Failure   |                                  |
               +-+-+-+-+-+-+                                  |
                    |WTP Alternate Tunnel Failure Indication  |
                    |(report failure)                         |
                    |---------------------------------------->|
                    |                                         |
               +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+                                |
               | Tunnel      |                                |
               | Established |                                |
               +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+                                |
                    |WTP Alternate Tunnel Failure Indication  |
                    |(report clearing failure)                |
                    |---------------------------------------->|
                    |                                         |

                    Figure 3: Setup of Alternate Tunnel

What if no tunnels can be established. What is the default behavior: all data frames sent to the AC? Or no communication? Or it is simply an AC deployment decision?
Maybe you want a have sentence such as

   For the case where AC is unreachable but the tunnel end point is
   still reachable, the WTP behavior is up to the implementation.  For
   example, the WTP could either choose to tear down the tunnel or let
   the existing user's traffic continue to be tunneled.



- I don't feel comfortable with

     *  0: CAPWAP.  This refers to a CAPWAP data channel described in
         [RFC5415  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5415>][RFC5416].  Additional 
description in
         [I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-03#ref-I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information>].
      *  1: L2TP.  This refers to tunnel encapsulation described in
         [RFC2661  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2661>].
      *  2: L2TPv3.  This refers to tunnel encapsulation described in
         [RFC3931  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3931>].
      *  3: IP-in-IP.  This refers to tunnel encapsulation described in
         [RFC2003  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2003>].
      *  4: PMIPv6.  This refers to the tunneling encapsulation
         described in [RFC5213  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5213>]
      *  5: GRE-IPv4.  This refers to GRE encapsulation with IPv4 as the
         delivery protocol as described in [RFC2784  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2784>]
      *  6: GRE-IPv6.  This refers to GRE encapsulation with IPv6 as the
         delivery protocol as described in [RFC2784  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2784>]

And

Tunnel-Type: This specification defines the Alternate Tunnel
      Encapsulations Type message element.  This element contains a
      field Tunnel-Type.  The namespace for the field is 16 bits
      (0-65535)).  This specification defines values, zero (0) through
      six (6) and can be found inSection 3.2  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-03#section-3.2>.
  Future allocations of
      values in this name space are to be assigned by IANA using the
      "Specification Required" policy.  IANA needs to create a registry
      called CAPWAP Alternate Tunnel-Types.  The registry format is
      given below.

        Tunnel-Type           Type Value   Reference
        CAPWAP                0
        L2TP                  1
        L2TPv3                2
        IP-IP                 3
        PMIPv6                4
        GRE-IPv4              5
        GRE-IPv6              6

In the first paragraph, you give the references, which is good. So they should be in the IANA section (second paragraph) as well. Btw, you have foreseen the Reference column. Then comes the problem, you can't have a reference in IANA to

[I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-03#ref-I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information>],

which is btw an informative reference in the draft, and not even a WG document. So the question is: do you need the reference to this draft in paragraph 1. I don't think so.

OLD:

     *  0: CAPWAP.  This refers to a CAPWAP data channel described in
         [RFC5415  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5415>][RFC5416].  Additional 
description in
         [I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information  
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-03#ref-I-D.xue-opsawg-capwap-alt-tunnel-information>]

NEW:

     *  0: CAPWAP.  This refers to a CAPWAP data channel described in
         [RFC5415  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5415>][RFC5416].


- Security Considerations.
So you're telling that, because the CAPWAP Control Channel is protected by DTLS, there are no chance for someone else that the AC to send or resend a WLAN Config. Response to redirect the traffic to another tunnel destination?
What if someone just pretends to the tunnel end point?

Regards, Benoit

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