thanks mehmet

On 2/20/15 9:46 AM, Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich) wrote:
> Hi Martin,
> 
> thank you for your comments.
> 
>> - Req-ID:  10.001: Not sure if this is really a requirement for a
>> transport protocol. I would read this as a requirement for the
>> implementation of a transport protocol.
> 
> The requirement was not meant to be for a particular transport protocol.
> The requirement involves indeed the upper layer with message transport.
> A simple example is the use of CoAP avoiding message fragmentation.
> 
> I would like to propose following change:
> 
> s/scalable transport layer/scalable message transport/
> 
>> - Req-ID:  10.002 says
>>       Description:  Diverse applications need a reliable transport of
>>       messages.  The reliability might be achieved based on a transport
>>       protocol such as TCP or can be supported based on message
>>       repetition if an acknowledgment is missing.
>>
>> Repitition without any limitation on the number of repititions, etc is
>> not a feature of a reliable transport protocol. I would remove "or can be
>> supported based on message repetition if an acknowledgment is missing".
>> Otherwise the text will blow up when you try to specific what features a
>> reliable transport protocol should have.
> 
> If we remove the part you meant I think we are losing something.
> I would like to suggest to change as following.
> 
> OLD:
>       The reliability might be achieved based on a transport
>       protocol such as TCP or can be supported based on message
>       repetition if an acknowledgment is missing.
> NEW:
>       The reliability might be achieved based on a transport
>       protocol such as TCP or can be supported using a message
>       repetition for the message transport.
> 
>> - Req-ID:  10.003: Multicast is not a feature of the transport layer.
> 
> The requirement is leaned on message transport.
> 
> With this may be should also change the subsection title to:
> 3.10. Transport layer and Message Transport 
> 
> Cheers, 
> Mehmet 
> 
> 
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> No objection to the publication of this draft, but of course a number of
> comments about Section 3.10 on Transport protocols:
> 
> - Req-ID:  10.001: Not sure if this is really a requirement for a
> transport protocol. I would read this as a requirement for the
> implementation of a transport protocol. 
> 
> - Req-ID:  10.002 says
>       Description:  Diverse applications need a reliable transport of
>       messages.  The reliability might be achieved based on a transport
>       protocol such as TCP or can be supported based on message
>       repetition if an acknowledgment is missing.
> 
> Repitition without any limitation on the number of repititions, etc is
> not a feature of a reliable transport protocol. I would remove "or can be
> supported based on message repetition if an acknowledgment is missing".
> Otherwise the text will blow up when you try to specific what features a
> reliable transport protocol should have. 
> 
> - Req-ID:  10.003: Multicast is not a feature of the transport layer.
> 
> 
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