Hi Benjamin, FWIW, I submitted a new version (-17) addressing your comments: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-17
Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : mohamed.boucad...@orange.com [mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com] > Envoyé : mardi 25 septembre 2018 23:49 > À : Benjamin Kaduk > Cc : The IESG; draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-y...@ietf.org; Joe Clarke; opsawg- > cha...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : RE: Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-16: > (with COMMENT) > > Re-, > > Removed the duplicate hold-down text. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Benjamin Kaduk [mailto:ka...@mit.edu] > > Envoyé : mardi 25 septembre 2018 23:45 > > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN > > Cc : The IESG; draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-y...@ietf.org; Joe Clarke; opsawg- > > cha...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > > Objet : Re: Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-16: > > (with COMMENT) > > > > On Tue, Sep 25, 2018 at 09:41:32PM +0000, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > wrote: > > > Re-, > > > > > > Please see inline. > > > > > > Cheers, > > > Med > > > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > > De : Benjamin Kaduk [mailto:ka...@mit.edu] > > > > Envoyé : mardi 25 septembre 2018 23:35 > > > > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN > > > > Cc : The IESG; draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-y...@ietf.org; Joe Clarke; opsawg- > > > > cha...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > > > > Objet : Re: Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-nat- > yang- > > 16: > > > > (with COMMENT) > > > > > > > > On Tue, Sep 25, 2018 at 09:27:08PM +0000, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > wrote: > > > > > Hi Benjamin, > > > > > > > > > > Thank you for the comments. > > > > > > > > > > Please see inline. > > > > > > > > Also inline. > > > > > > > > > Cheers, > > > > > Med > > > > > > > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > > > > De : Benjamin Kaduk [mailto:ka...@mit.edu] > > > > > > Envoyé : mardi 25 septembre 2018 20:31 > > > > > > À : The IESG > > > > > > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-y...@ietf.org; Joe Clarke; opsawg- > > > > cha...@ietf.org; > > > > > > jcla...@cisco.com; opsawg@ietf.org > > > > > > Objet : Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-nat- > yang- > > 16: > > > > (with > > > > > > COMMENT) > > > > > > > > > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for > > > > > > draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-16: No Objection > > > > > > > > > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to > all > > > > > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut > > this > > > > > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss- > > criteria.html > > > > > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang/ > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > -- > > - > > > > > > COMMENT: > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > -- > > - > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks for the easy-to-read document! I just have a few comments > and > > > > > > potential nits > > > > > > I noticed. > > > > > > > > > > > > It was somewhat interesting to me that basically everything is > config > > rw, > > > > > > including ports and > > > > > > addresses that would normally be assigned internally by the NAT, > but > > I > > > > don't > > > > > > see this as > > > > > > problematic. > > > > > > > > > > [Med] This is a good point. Actually, we are using rw because the > same > > > > structure is also used for static mappings. That is, the external port > > and IP > > > > address are also provided. > > > > > > > > I had even internalized that, just somehow didn't make the connection _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
