Hi Dmytro, Thanks for your update. Now the agenda is not published. So we have not open the CFP. But I will record your request.
Cheers, Tianran 发件人: OPSAWG [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 Dmytro Shytyi 发送时间: 2019年10月18日 22:30 收件人: Dmytro Shytyi <[email protected]> 抄送: opsawg <[email protected]> 主题: Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt Hello all, We updated the draft to version draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03.txt with the new information. We added a section that describes what could be done with uCPE, precisely the advantages that uCPE introduces. Tehre are sevaral nice figures that describe how we could take an advantage of uCPE. If needed, we also can introduce the layered architecture of the YANG models that are in stacked orchestrators. Dear chairs of the wg, I will attend the next IETF meeting and I would like to have a 'brief' slot to present the draft. A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03.txt has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Revision: 03 Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management. Document date: 2019-10-18 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 41 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03<https://www.ietf..org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-03> Abstract: This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM) and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network Service Orchestrator. ______________ Dmytro SHYTYI, SFR. ---- On Tue, 08 Oct 2019 18:33:13 +0200 Dmytro Shytyi <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote ---- Hello Joe, Thank you for your comment. In the new version: We updated the existing yang model according to your suggestions(now the nits and validation logs seem to be clear). We expanded the uCPE management yang model with interface model from RFC 8343( A YANG Data Model for Interface Management) Now there are 3 yang files that you may strip from I-D: * vsym-service.yang * modified ietf-interfaces.yang (augments vsym-service.yang) * ietf-vsym-interfaces.yang (augments vsum-service.yang and has ref to "vLinks" from vsym-service). A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Revision: 02 Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management. Document date: 2019-10-08 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 40 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-02 Abstract: This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM) and definition of the uCPE equipment. The YANG Service Model serves as a base framework for managing an universal Customer-Premises Equipment (uCPE) subsystem. The model can be used by a Network Service Orchestrator. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. The IETF Secretariat ---- On Mon, 07 Oct 2019 15:50:40 +0200 Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote ---- _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg On Sep 30, 2019, at 17:17, Dmytro Shytyi <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Dear members of opsawg, Recently we uploaded a draft about uCPE management. You are invited to answer few questions regarding the draft https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt. One thing that would help with reviews is if you cleaned up this YANG module. Consider using pyang -f yang --keep-comments to generate something well-formatted, and —canonical to check ordering. In particular, your revisions are out of order. Question1: Do you find a difinition of uCPE is well explained? If no what could be improved? I think it is, but as a vendor that makes such a device, I may not be the right person to ask. What I mean is that I inherently understand the concept. It would be good if others perhaps that use such devices could weigh in. Joe You may answer: I agree with definition. OR I think it could be modified... Question2: Do you think there is enough examples of internal uCPE service and usecases that are well depicted. You may answer: The examples and usecases are well explained. OR The usecases need improvements. Question3: Do you find that yang model should stay unchanged regarding the phy interfaces. Maybe one may think about "ietf interface" instead of "phyInterface". You may answer: The yang model looks good for me. OR The yang model needs more improvements(which improvements). ______________ Best Regards, Dmytro SHYTYI ---- On Thu, 26 Sep 2019 18:01:14 +0200 <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote ---- A new version of I-D, draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt has been successfully submitted by Dmytro Shytyi and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Revision: 01 Title: A YANG Module for uCPE management. Document date: 2019-09-26 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 15 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf..org/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-shytyi-opsawg-vysm-01 Abstract: This document provides a YANG data model for uCPE management (VYSM) and definition of the uCPE equipment. 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