Thanks, Rob.  Maybe it’s just me, but your email is truncated as you can see 
below.  I also didn’t see any attachment.

Joe

> On Jul 10, 2020, at 12:52, Rob Wilton (rwilton) <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Apologies for the delay, but please find my AD review of the TACACS+ YANG 
> module draft.
> 
> I would like to thank the authors for their work on this document, and the WG 
> for providing reviews and input in this document.
> 
> I believe that the document is in good shape but propose some minor changes 
> to some of the wording in places.
> 
> One particular question that I would like to pull to the top is the naming of 
> the module and identifiers:
> These generally use "tacacsplus", but I think that "tacacs-plus" might be 
> better and more readable.
> 
> 
> Full comments are inline in the document below (marked as #)
> 
> 
>   The YANG model can be used with network management protocols such as
>   NETCONF[RFC6241] to install, manipulate, and delete the configuration
>   of network devices.
> 
>    Abstract
> 
>       This document defines a YANG module that augment the System      
>       Management data model defined in the RFC 7317 with TACACS+ client
>       model.  The data model of Terminal Access Controller Access Control
>       System Plus (TACACS+) client allows the configuration of TACACS+
>       servers for centralized Authentication, Authorization and Accounting

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