Thanks Rob for quick checking.
Talking with Med, we have agreed to remove that sentence. The change is 
reflected in v-05
See v-05
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-model-automation-framework-05
the diff is:
https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?difftype=--hwdiff&url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-model-automation-framework-05.txt

-Qin&Med
-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Rob Wilton (rwilton) [mailto:[email protected]] 
发送时间: 2020年9月19日 1:21
收件人: [email protected]; opsawg <[email protected]>
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主题: RE: AD review for draft-ietf-opsawg-model-automation-framework-04

Hi Med,

The changes that you have made look good.  But I had some comments at the end 
of my review email that it doesn't look like you have responded to, or 
actioned.  Hence, I'm wondering if my review email might have been truncated, 
or the end of it missed (from "Also, I ...") onwards (copied below).


A.3.1.1.  Schema Mount

   That capability does not cover design time.

This sentence is unclear on its own.  Perhaps either expand it or remove it
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