Hi Alex, The 07 version of the draft has been submitted, which addresses all of your comments in your last review. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf/ Thanks again for your help on improving the work!
Best regards, Haoyu From: Alexander Clemm <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, February 17, 2021 6:31 PM To: [email protected] Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06 Dear Haoyu and coauthors, Thank you very much for your new revision. IMHO, the document has greatly improved; you clearly put significant work into it! I still have a few comments, but those are fewer and in most cases only minor (a few requiring a bit more consideration towards the end). FWIW, I am enclosing those comments as a marked up PDF of the draft, attached. While I hope you can accommodate them in a future revision, that should not hold up progressing the document. Thanks --- Alex
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