Hi Moti, Thank you for the comments.
Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Moti Morgenstern <[email protected]> > Envoyé : mercredi 17 novembre 2021 07:23 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Objet : RE: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-11.txt > > Hi all, > > Few comments to -11: > 1) evpn-redundancy-mode in "ietf-ethernet-segment" YANG module should > actually be called es-redundancy-mode, because it consists of modes "... > for a given ES" [Med] We used to have evpn- prefix because this identity was defined in the l2vpn-ntw module. Even if I think that there is no confusion with the current name (the definition is clear enough and appropriate reference pointers are included), I'm OK to make the change. > 2) evpn-service-type should be removed from "ietf-ethernet-segment" YANG > module because it is unused there. Actually the same Identity appears in > "ietf-l2vpn-ntw" YANG module. [Med] OK > 3) evpn-service-type in "ietf-l2vpn-ntw" YANG module should actually be > called evpn-service-interface-type and the Description clause of the base > identity should be corrected to "Base identity for EVPN service interface > type.". [Med] Idem as for the first bullet, but happy to make the change. FWIW, these changes can be tracked at: https://tinyurl.com/l2nm-latest > > Regards, > Moti > > -----Original Message----- > From: OPSAWG <[email protected]> On Behalf Of > [email protected] > Sent: Tuesday, November 16, 2021 6:42 PM > To: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-11.txt > > Hi all, > > This version includes a set of clarification to address the rtgdir review. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de internet- > > [email protected] Envoyé : mardi 16 novembre 2021 17:38 À : > > [email protected] Cc : [email protected] Objet : [OPSAWG] I-D > > Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-11.txt > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area > > Working Group WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : A Layer 2 VPN Network YANG Model > > Authors : Samier Barguil > > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > > Mohamed Boucadair > > Luis Angel Munoz > > Filename : draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-11.txt > > Pages : 156 > > Date : 2021-11-16 > > > > Abstract: > > This document defines an L2VPN Network YANG Model (L2NM) that can be > > used to manage the provisioning of Layer 2 Virtual Private Network > > (VPN) services within a network (e.g., service provider network). > > The L2NM complements the Layer 2 Service Model (L2SM) by providing a > > network-centric view of the service that is internal to a service > > providers. 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