Hi Erik, 

Thanks for the comments.

Updated both sections you mentioned with more text. Please check: 
https://tinyurl.com/l2nm-latest

Cheers,
Med

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> # Internet AD comments for {draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-17}
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> ## Comments
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> ### S6
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> * Should the 'df-election' description make brief mention of the
> meaning
>   and use of the 'revertive' boolean?
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> ### S8.3
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> * I can find neither 'revertive' nor 'preempt' in RFC 8584.  Can
> the
>   description be expanded a bit to provide more context (or maybe
> the
>   reference section)?
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