Hi Michal,

Jean posted a new version of the draft, to address your comments.

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang/


Regards, Benoit
On 7/11/2022 11:07 AM, Michal Vaško via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Michal Vaško
Review result: Ready with Nits

The YANG module seems to be in a good state and I only have some points for
discussion.

- identity names "subservice-idty" and "service-instance-idty"

I do not like the abbreviation "idty" and find it confusing. The other identity
"dependency-type" is using "type" despite the other 2 base identities being
some types, too, so perhaps they can be changed to "subservice-type" and
"service-instance", respectively, or some other similar name. If alternative
names are not suitable for some reason, I would prefer at least the full form
"subservice-identity" and "service-instance-identity". Similarly in the augment
modules.

- leaf "under-maintenance" and leaf "maintenance-contact"

The chosen way to model this functionality was using 2 leaves with a "when" on
the second one, which works but may be unnecessarily complex. The simplest way
would be to keep only the "maintenance-contact" leaf since its existence can be
interpreted as the true/false value of "under-maintenance", with its
description mentioning this.


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