Super!! Thanks.

//Zahed
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Subject: RE: Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-14: 
(with COMMENT)

Hi Zahed,

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

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> Thanks for working on this specification.
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> I must say, without the right context and knowledge about network
> topology in
> this context it is very hard to follow figure 3. A description of
> the figure or
> reference of the document one should read to understand the
> topology would be a
> great help.
>

[Med] Added this NEW text right after Figure 1:

NEW:
 The reader may refer to Section 5 of [RFC4026] for an overview of the
 building blocks that are usually invoked when characterizing a
 network.



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