Hi Med, Many thanks for your valuable input. We will address your comments in our next review of the document. I look forward to discussing this further in Prague. I didn’t have time to review all your comments in detail yet, but we will get back to you on it.
As mentioned to Benoit Claise, in previous email, we will add a reference to rfc7460 and EMAN-related work in the next release. Indeed, the reference to the inventory refers to the ongoing work of the IVY WG. Also hope that before the next release of the document, it will also be a clearer definition/structure of how the inventory modules will look like. Many thanks, Marisol Marisol Palmero CCIE #5122 | Technical Leader EMEA | Cisco CPX TEAO | P: +34.91.201.2643 | M: +34.629.634.595 From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Date: Tuesday, 31 October 2023 at 15:21 To: Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei) <[email protected]>, Jan Lindblad (jlindbla) <[email protected]>, Snezana Mitrovic (snmitrov) <[email protected]>, STEPHAN Emile INNOV/NET <[email protected]>, Per Andersson (perander) <[email protected]>, Esther Roure Vila (erourevi) <[email protected]> Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-opsawg-poweff-00.txt Hi Marisol, all, Thank you for sharing this document. FWIW, you may find some comments at: * Pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-opsawg-poweff-00-rev%20Med.pdf * Doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-opsawg-poweff-00-rev%20Med.doc I was expecting to see at least some references or reuse of some of the aspects already covered in documents such as rfc7460. I was also surprised by some deviations form the interface module without explaining the rationale. Overall, the rationale for the modules structure and how they can be used to achieve the goals set in the first sections of the document are missing. Also, the document cites the inventory model but I was not sure whether you are referring to the IVY ongoing work. This is a -00, so please don’t be surprised by the 69 comments in the review. Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) Envoyé : vendredi 27 octobre 2023 19:07 À : [email protected] Cc : Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei) <[email protected]>; Jan Lindblad (jlindbla) <[email protected]>; Snezana Mitrovic (snmitrov) <[email protected]>; STEPHAN Emile INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; Per Andersson (perander) <[email protected]>; Esther Roure Vila (erourevi) <[email protected]>; STEPHAN Emile INNOV/NET <[email protected]> Objet : [OPSAWG] FW: New Version Notification for draft-opsawg-poweff-00.txt Dear OPSA WG, Earlier this week, we posted a new draft that introduces a data model for power and energy related metrics : https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-opsawg-poweff/ The focus is mainly on runtime information provided by power sensors, but also an extension to other related metrics and given attributes that will complement the representation of the energy consumed by the network device, implemented in hardware or software, as well as by specific network components. This is a first-version approach where we see still challenges based on implementation. Note: Some of those challenges are covered on Jan`s draft: draft-lindblad-tlm-philatelist<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lindblad-tlm-philatelist/> Along with POWEFF draft, we’ve also updated the version of the Sustainability Insights draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-almprs-sustainability-insights/ where we introduced an updated architecture reference diagram, that provides a more structured view of the functional blocks that might be part of where those attributes and metrics might be produced, processed, visualized, etc. We also have reviewed and added Use Cases that such framework could drive. We greatly appreciate your thoughts and comments. Many thanks, Marisol Palmero From: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Friday, 20 October 2023 at 17:45 To: Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Jan Lindblad (jlindbla) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>, Snezana Mitrovic (snmitrov) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-opsawg-poweff-00.txt A new version of Internet-Draft draft-opsawg-poweff-00.txt has been successfully submitted by Marisol Palmero and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-opsawg-poweff Revision: 00 Title: Power and Energy Efficiency Date: 2023-10-20 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 37 URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-opsawg-poweff-00.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-opsawg-poweff/ HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-opsawg-poweff Abstract: This document motivates and specifies a data model to report power and energy efficiency of an asset. As highlighted during the IAB workshop on environmental impacts (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iab-ws-environmental- impacts-report-00), visibility is a very important first step (paraphrasing Peter Drucker's mantra of "You cannot improve what you don't measure"). During the workshop the need for standardized metrics was established, to avoid proprietary, double counting and even contradictory metrics across vendors. This Power and Energy Efficiency Telemetry Specification (POWEFF) is required to promote consistency across vendors and consumers, based on: 1. The definition of datasets and attributes defining a common data model utilized by the standard calculation to yield power and energy efficiency value for any asset or network element. 2. The standard calculations utilizing the specified datasets and attributes which will yield energy consumption and energy efficiency value for any asset or network element. The model provides information and data requirements for calculating the Power and Energy Efficiency for specific assets. Assets can include hardware (physical or virtual), software, applications, or services. 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