Hi Joe, all, I think the document is ready to move forward.
Some very minor items to save Randy some cycles: * Abstract: add "This document obsoletes RFC 9092." * Abstract: s/datafiles/data files * The changes vs 9092 lists "Geofeed file only UTF-8 CSV", but the NEW abstract removes the CSV mentions that were called out in the abstract of RFC9092. I would revert to the OLD wording in 9092. * I would delete "Stress that authenticating geofeed data is optional." as it was clear enough in 9092 that part is optional: " An optional utterly awesome but slightly complex means for authenticating geofeed data" * Inappropriate use of normative language in an example in Section 4: s/ this MUST be discarded because 192.0.2.0/24 is within the more/ this must be discarded because 192.0.2.0/24 is within the more * Not sure I would keep the last para starting with "There is open-source code to traverse ..." in Section 4. This is can be moved to an appendix of to Section 8. Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de Joe Clarke (jclarke) Envoyé : mardi 14 novembre 2023 19:56 À : [email protected] Objet : [OPSAWG] WG LC: draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update This kicks off a two week WG LC on the update to "Finding and Using Geofeed Data". This draft has received some initial comments and a rather extensive certificate review from Job. We'd appreciate some more eyes to look iover the changes to the original RFC9092 and focus comments there. Thanks again to mcr for agreeing to shepherd this document. In addition to substantive comments, we'd appreciate reviewers that think it is ready to go to say so on-list. The WG LC will end on November 28, 2023. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-9092-update/ Thanks. Joe ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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