Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft for an early review. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-03 Reviewer:Behcet Sarikaya Review Date:2024-01-08 IETF LC End Date:NA IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This document provides simple fixes to the IANA IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) registry. It provides a summary of previous work on the fixes. It updates to ensure a consistent structure when calling an existing IANA registry and many other updates. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In my view the history presented needs to mention that the origin of this work is RFC 5101 which defines IPFIX protocol between exporting process and collecting process and the accompanying RFC 5102 defining IPFIX IEs. Running an idnits on the draft shows many issues. Here is one I want to emphasize: Section 4.1.2 on updates to ipv6ExtensionHeaders Description has this line: 12, MOB 135 IPv6 mobility [RFC3775] which needs to be updated with: 12, MOB 135 IPv6 mobility [RFC6275] Also maybe all RFC references should be listed as idnits tool indicates. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
