As a contributor…

I support the adoption of this work as I feel it will help inform the overall 
T+ TLS 1.3 specification.  I have some specific comments and nits, though:

Abstract:

s/This modules augments/This module augments/

Section 1:

Do you need to state that the first version of this spec used a pruning 
approach?  Ultimately, when this is published that won’t matter.

In the module itself, I’d like a few abbreviations expanded in the descriptions:

leaf target-kdf • expand KDF

container ca-certs • expand CA (yeah, I know)

container ee-certs • expand EE

Why do you define a new grouping, tcp-server-info?  Why not just augment what 
is in 9105?  This adds complexity with minimal, if any, benefit that I see.

Does the new domain-name leaf need to be mandatory if certs are used?

Finally, on operational data, should this module introduce any TLS-specific 
stats in addition to those in 9105?  I feel like certificate issues or PSK 
problems might be useful.

Joe

From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, October 22, 2024 at 09:24
To: [email protected] <[email protected]>
Subject: [OPSAWG]CALL FOR ADOPTION: A YANG Model for Terminal Access Controller 
Access-Control System Plus (TACACS+) over TLS 1.3
The IPR poll has concluded (no known IPR has been disclosed), and we would like 
to start a two week adoption poll for 
draft-boucadair-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-boucadair-opsawg-secure-tacacs-yang/>.
  Please respond on-list with support and especially comments.

The adoption call will run until November 5.

Thanks.

Joe

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