Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > ## COMMENTS (non-blocking)
> ### Why informational ?
> The shepherd write-up is rather silent on the intended status of
informational
> as it seems to me that proposed standard would be a better fit.
Informational Seems wrong.
I see that the document declares that, and I think that's a copy'n'paste
mistake.
It should be std. At one point, we were told that only IETF-stream STD could
create certain categories of registry, and that's why we couldn't go ISE.
> Moreover, draft-ietf-opsawg-pcapng has, rightfully, a normative reference
to a
> previous version (draft-richardson-opsawg-pcaplinktype) of this I-D,
i.e., this
> creates a downref.
Fixed in my copy.
> ### Abstract
> An abstract should be short of course, but this one is a little too
short: why
> not adding reference (expansion at least) for PCAP. It also uses the word
> "describes", which is correct for an informational I-D, even if it
actually
> "specifies" the value, i.e., why not 'proposed standard' ?
I'm not sure PCAP still has an expansion, but I've expanded it to "Packet
CAPture". How about:
This document describes a set of Packet CAPture (PCAP)-related LinkType
values and
creates an IANA registry for those values.
These values are used by the PCAP and PCAP-Now-Generic specifications.
> ### Section 2
> As I spotted only one use of BCP14 (moreover in an informational I-D) in
> section 3.2 (IANA considerations), please remove this section. See also
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/statement-iesg-statement-on-clarifying-the-use-of-bcp-14-key-words/
> about the use of BCP14 terms in IANA considerations.
fixed.
> ### Section 3.2.2
> Per section 4.2 of RFC 8126, there is no designated expert for a FCFS
registry,
> i.e., remove this section or change the registry policy to 'expert
review'.
So, we want FCFS with Expert Review.
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