Hi Gorry, Thanks for the comments.
An updated version has been posted: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization/16 Please see my comments inline, marked [TM]. On Mon, Jan 12, 2026 at 5:15 PM Gorry Fairhurst via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > > Gorry Fairhurst has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization-15: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-characterization/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > This was a clear document and it seems to provide a useful set of defintions. > > I have the following (non-blocking) comments: > > 1. Abstract > The present abstract reads more like a problem statememt for the work, than a > summary of the key things being standardised. I suggest this current text > still > may be useful intoroduction, but the abstract could more be usefully based on > the text in the first para of section 3.1. [TM] The abstract has been revised in this version, and generally speaking has undergone several iterations to make sure that this draft 'does what it says on the box'. Therefore, at this point we would prefer not to make further significant changes in the abstract. > > 2. Section 3.5? > Would it be helpful for the words "equal forwarding treatment" be replaced by > the defined term "Equal-Forwarding-Treatment" for more consistency? [TM] Good catch. Fixed. > > Best wishes, Gorry > > > Cheers, Tal. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
