Hi, Dhruv, Thanks a lot for the review, the authors have prepared a PR to fix the nits below, which is available at https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/policy-based-network-acl/pull/144/changes, this will be incorporated in next revision, thanks a lot!
Best Regards, Qiufang -----Original Message----- From: Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, January 27, 2026 12:55 AM To: [email protected] Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-11 ietf last call Opsdir review Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl Title: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network Access Control Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Nits Hi, I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this Internet-Draft. I did an early review on -08 - https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-08-opsdir-early-dhody-2025-10-06/; I have verified the diff. The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that adequate operational considerations are covered. A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in IETF Specifications"_ can be found at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis/. While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback received. - Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-11 - Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody - Review Date: 2026-01-26 - Intended Status: Standards Track --- ## Summary Choose one: - Has Nits: This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. ## General Operational Comments Alignment with RFC 5706bis The draft includes an Operational Considerations with key focus areas which seems acceptable for this document. ## Major Issues No major issues found. ## Minor Issues No Minor issues found. ## Nits - Section 2, formatting issue with device group and Application group. Thanks! Dhruv _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
