Matthew:

Thank you for your comments. Sorry about the delay in replying.
We (authors) have uploaded a new version and have included changes
reflecting your comments. Please see:
https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsec-urpf-improvements-04.txt  
Please also see responses to your comments inline below. 

>Summary:
>I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved 
>before publication.
>
>
>Comments:
>
>Generally, I found the draft quite readable, with a clear explanation of the 
>problem statements and solutions as well
>as the trade-offs on the implementation. However, I have one minor comment and 
>a nit.
>
>Major Issues:
>
>No major issues found.
>
>
>Minor Issues:
>
>Terminology: The document expands 'uRPF' as 'unicast reverse path filtering'. 
>However, I
>believe that uRPF commonly means 'unicast reverse path forwarding'   (see 
>RFC3704 and
>most vendor documentation). "Ingress filtering" is the general concept and 
>"reverse path
> forwarding" the specific algorithm. Did the authors intend to use a new term, 
> and if so why?
>

Great catch. I am surprised we (authors) overlooked and no one else caught it 
for so long.
Thank you!  Fixed. 

>
>Nits:
>
>Section 2.5: "...separate from the global Routing Information Base (RIB) 
>[Juniper][RFC4364]."
>VRFs are supported by most vendors so I think it is sufficient just to 
>reference RFC4364.
>

The sentence now reads:
   The Virtual Routing and Forwarding (VRF) technology [RFC4364]
   [Juniper] allows a router to maintain multiple routing table
   instances separate from the global Routing Information Base (RIB).

Shuffled the order of references. Keeping [Juniper] because there is some 
tutorial material in it that may be helpful for some readers.

Regards,
Sriram  

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