Eric
I submitted the shepherd write-up.
I ran the idnits and it found the following obsolete references. We should
clear that up before we publish it. I can update my comments on that once
the draft is updated.
Checking references for intended status: Informational
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-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2460
(Obsoleted by RFC 8200)
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3068
(Obsoleted by RFC 7526)
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3627
(Obsoleted by RFC 6547)
Thank you
Gyan
On Mon, Nov 4, 2019 at 9:38 AM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]>
wrote:
> Hello Gyan,
>
> Thank you for reminding the author to post the 'gist' of the changes with
> version -21.
>
> Our OPS AD, Warren "Ace" Kumari, has kindly reviewed our document and has
> identified more than 70 areas where the text was ambiguous or using bad
> English... No wonder, none of the 4 authors are English-speaking native: it
> is a mix of Estonian (Merike who also speaks German and Russian[1]), one of
> the 22 (?) language of India (KK), German (Enno who also speaks French and
> Spanish) and French (myself also speaking Dutch) __ __ IETF community is
> really diverse !
>
> Thank you very much in advance for finalizing the shepherd write-up
>
> -éric
>
> [1] I can be wrong for Merike BTW but she is quadri-lingual
>
> On 04/11/2019, 15:26, "Gyan Mishra" <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Hi Eric
>
> Just checking what the updates are that went in v21 since this
> document is now ready to be published just pending my Shepard writeup which
> I plan to finish this week.
>
> Thank you
>
> Gyan
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> > On Nov 3, 2019, at 4:56 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Operational Security Capabilities
> for IP Network Infrastructure WG of the IETF.
> >
> > Title : Operational Security Considerations for
> IPv6 Networks
> > Authors : Eric Vyncke
> > Kiran Kumar Chittimaneni
> > Merike Kaeo
> > Enno Rey
> > Filename : draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt
> > Pages : 52
> > Date : 2019-11-03
> >
> > Abstract:
> > Knowledge and experience on how to operate IPv4 securely is
> > available: whether it is the Internet or an enterprise internal
> > network. However, IPv6 presents some new security challenges. RFC
> > 4942 describes the security issues in the protocol but network
> > managers also need a more practical, operations-minded document to
> > enumerate advantages and/or disadvantages of certain choices.
> >
> > This document analyzes the operational security issues in several
> > places of a network (enterprises, service providers and residential
> > users) and proposes technical and procedural mitigations
> techniques.
> > Some very specific places of a network such as the Internet of
> Things
> > are not discussed in this document.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-v6/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org..
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >
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> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec
>
>
>
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