Most welcome Eric! I will update the write-up based on what you stated on the intended obsoleted references.
Gyan Sent from my iPhone > On Nov 9, 2019, at 2:57 AM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]> wrote: > > Gyan > > Thank you very much for your shepherd write-up, very much appreciated by the > authors. > > The list of the ‘obsoleted’ references is intentional indeed to ensure that > readers understand that ‘old’ documents have been replaced. The text in the > document is clear about the obsolete and current document. So, we do prefer > to leave the references like they are as we believe that they make the > document more valuable for the reader. > > Regards > > -éric > > From: Gyan Mishra <[email protected]> > Date: Saturday, 9 November 2019 at 08:28 > To: Eric Vyncke <[email protected]> > Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" > <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: [OPSEC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt > > Eric > > I submitted the shepherd write-up. > > I ran the idnits and it found the following obsolete references. We should > clear that up before we publish it. I can update my comments on that once > the draft is updated. > Checking references for intended status: Informational > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2460 > (Obsoleted by RFC 8200) > > -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3068 > (Obsoleted by RFC 7526) > > -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3627 > (Obsoleted by RFC 6547) > > Thank you > > Gyan > > On Mon, Nov 4, 2019 at 9:38 AM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]> > wrote: > Hello Gyan, > > Thank you for reminding the author to post the 'gist' of the changes with > version -21. > > Our OPS AD, Warren "Ace" Kumari, has kindly reviewed our document and has > identified more than 70 areas where the text was ambiguous or using bad > English... No wonder, none of the 4 authors are English-speaking native: it > is a mix of Estonian (Merike who also speaks German and Russian[1]), one of > the 22 (?) language of India (KK), German (Enno who also speaks French and > Spanish) and French (myself also speaking Dutch) __ __ IETF community is > really diverse ! > > Thank you very much in advance for finalizing the shepherd write-up > > -éric > > [1] I can be wrong for Merike BTW but she is quadri-lingual > > On 04/11/2019, 15:26, "Gyan Mishra" <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Eric > > Just checking what the updates are that went in v21 since this document > is now ready to be published just pending my Shepard writeup which I plan to > finish this week. > > Thank you > > Gyan > > Sent from my iPhone > > > On Nov 3, 2019, at 4:56 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Operational Security Capabilities for > IP Network Infrastructure WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : Operational Security Considerations for IPv6 > Networks > > Authors : Eric Vyncke > > Kiran Kumar Chittimaneni > > Merike Kaeo > > Enno Rey > > Filename : draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt > > Pages : 52 > > Date : 2019-11-03 > > > > Abstract: > > Knowledge and experience on how to operate IPv4 securely is > > available: whether it is the Internet or an enterprise internal > > network. However, IPv6 presents some new security challenges. RFC > > 4942 describes the security issues in the protocol but network > > managers also need a more practical, operations-minded document to > > enumerate advantages and/or disadvantages of certain choices. > > > > This document analyzes the operational security issues in several > > places of a network (enterprises, service providers and residential > > users) and proposes technical and procedural mitigations techniques. > > Some very specific places of a network such as the Internet of Things > > are not discussed in this document. > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-v6/ > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > OPSEC mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec > > > > > -- > Gyan S. 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