Hi Med, 

Thank you for your valuable comments.

I am very happy to add the history of proof of transit work in the -01 draft. 
It could also help to develop more convincing use cases to the work. The draft 
is open for discussion and we invite suggestions and collaborations of all 
kinds :)

Regarding the appropriate venue of the work, I do think path 
assessment/validation is a big topic not one draft can cover. It includes 
various of techniques of different maturity stages-- some are good for IETF and 
some are good for IRTF. I will further consider it with more inputs. 

If you also attended the 117 meeting in-person let's catch up!

Best,
Chunchi

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发件人: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> 
发送时间: 2023年7月21日 6:05
收件人: liuchunchi <liuchun...@huawei.com>; opsec@ietf.org
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主题: RE: Sharing a new draft

Hi Chunchi, Qin, all,

Thank you for sharing this draft. 

Even if I understand that this is a -00, I was expecting the draft to leverage 
on the long history with the proof of transit work in the IETF. I'm afraid that 
the current set of use cases are not that appealing to motivate what the 
document seems (at least to me :-)) to over-sell in the abstract/introduction. 

That's said, I do think that there are aspects of the network path 
assessment/validation that are worth to be investigated (not only proof of 
transit, but proof of non transit). These considerations would be more 
appropriate to investigate in venues such as PANRG, especially that the I-D 
will have to answer to the same PANRG questions about whether/how internal 
paths are exposed + how forwarding instructions are signaled to network 
elements, etc.

FWIW, some comments and suggestions can be found at: 

* pdf: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-liu-on-network-path-validation-00-rev%20Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-liu-on-network-path-validation-00-rev%20Med.doc

Cheers,
Med

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> vendredi 14 juillet 2023 11:09 À : opsec@ietf.org Cc : Qin Wu 
> <bill...@huawei.com> Objet : [OPSEC] Sharing a new draft
> 
> Hi Team,
> 
> We are sharing a new draft we wrote titled "On Network Path 
> Validation". In this draft, we explore the path validation problem, 
> how it affects routing security, its potential solution and several 
> real life use cases.
> 
> If you are interested in the topic we sincerely invite you to take a 
> look and give comments.
> 
> Draft: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-on-network-path-validation/
> >
> Thank you!
> 
> Best regards,
> Chunchi
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
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>    Title           : On Network Path Validation
>    Authors         : Chunchi Liu
>                      Qin Wu
>                      Liang Xia
>    Filename        : draft-liu-on-network-path-validation-00.txt
>    Pages           : 8
>    Date            : 2023-07-09
> 
> Abstract:
>    Network path validation refers to a technology that ensures data
>    packets to strictly travel along a chosen network path.  It aims to
>    enforce data to travel only on the assigned network path and 
> provide
>    evidence that the data has indeed followed this path.  While 
> existing
>    efforts primarily focus on the control plane, path validation
>    protects and monitors routing security in the data plane.  This
>    document provides a technical definition of the Network Path
>    Validation problem, briefly overviews past efforts, models its 
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