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Marcelo, If you insist.... here it is J Normally my critics are a bit “rough” ( I think this
is the word), so don’t get me wrong. It seems your project is far from finished, so I guess you want opinion
for what you have done so far. -
I wouldn’t use a
datagrid component to show the “agenda”. It’s design has
nothing to do with the rest of the design. DataGrid is heavy, and I guess your
swf is at least 70 kb bigger because of it. -
Images are “pixilated”.
You can solve this with by activating bitmap smoothing. To do this, when images
are received, on load init, you can create a bitmap copy using the bitmap data
class, remove the loaded image, and attach the copied bitmap with the smooth
flag on. This way, images will have much better quality after resize and
rotation changed. You could also include the title of the images. Activate
anti-alias for readability, keep the titles without rotation, and do the same
you do for images. Font will look much better after rotation. Disadvantages: bitmapdata
is not fast, so make sure your images are smaller than 300pixels wide. -
I would do some tweaking on
the design. You are using Flash, so your possibilities are “endless”.
:o) -
There are some places where
the font showing is time new roman. This probably is happening because you’ve
forgot to embed font outlines. -
Only the photo viewer is
working right? The rest didn’t show up for me. -
On the “download photo –
baixar foto” you could use the file reference class,so you won’t
need popups and “save as” right click. Remember that some browsers
block popups, and when we make something we have to assume that the visitor is
the most dumb you can think of (they are not, it’s just a rule to follow
for good usability :P). You can solve this easily in a more elegant way with
the “.download” on FileReference class. -
You don’t need to block
user interaction when you are communicating with the server. You should only
block submit buttons. -
Your gallery seems very
similar to the Sephiroth’s one (www.sephiroth.it
). Not a critic, just a statement :o) -
In the place where you can
comment a photo, you have a lot of different fonts. There is a small rule you
should follow: on the same screen, there shouldn’t be more than three
different fonts. This is allow too swf file size reduction. -
There are places where fonts
seems not be anti-aliased for readability, or embed. -
When you want to post a
comment, the animation is smooth. But when you navigate through the photos, the
animation is “hard”. You should use the same type of animation, to
keep your site consistent. Since my service capture has expired, I wasn’t able to sniff
your amf packets content (I am not in the mood to install other packet sniffer),
to see how you are communicating, and also if there is any apparent security
flaw to exploit using your forms. I think there is a lot of work to be done,
most of it on design tweaking. I do not have time to test more, but those are
my suggestions to you. Don’t get me wrong for being such critic :o) João Saleiro From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Marcelo de Moraes
Serpa Well, don´t mean to be childish or something, or to keep
insisting "please visit my website!", but as this was my first big
project with osflash tools and libraries, I would be very happy if any of you
would take 2minutes of your time and tell me what you think, what could be
improved in your opinion. If you need more info on how I did something, please,
don´t hesitate to ask :)
On 6/6/06, Marcelo de Moraes Serpa
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: Holy cow, I forgot to include the URL: www.chapeco-online.com.br On 6/6/06, Marcelo de Moraes Serpa
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote: Well, it has been only a couple of days since I´ve put this
version online. This application was a major rewritting of my old system (which
was based mostly on the timeline and was a total mess, I just couldn´t
understand anything I´ve done when I saw the code some days ago). This one was
done using ARP and ARPX (Grant´s e Christopher ones). I´ve also used Pixlib and
the excellent Fuse + ZigoEngine for all the animations (tweens). Other
tools/libraries I used were: LuminicBox log API (FlashInspector), XRay.
FlashDevelop as the IDE for coding, Flash IDE the IDE for designs and of
course, mtasc to compile.
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