Hello Cameron,

the presentation looks good. Good luck for your talk.

Here are my suggestions:

* Slide 1
* mention Lubuntu 18.4
* add a slide for documentation and languages (you could delete a slide of a special software to be able to add the slide f.e. rastaman or spatialite)
 - OSGeoLive offers overview and quickstart for easy leaning
 - OSGeo is translated to several languages
* mention many people are involved

* Slide 2: Quality: update the screenshot. The Logo is now the new OSGeoLive-Logo: https://live.osgeo.org/en/metrics.html

* the block box around all logos is not nice - would be better without

* add a slide for get involved

Thanks for presenting OSGeoLive and many warm greetings to FOSS4G Sotm Oceania!

Astrid

Am 07.11.2018 02:45 schrieb Cameron Shorter:
I've been squeezing our OSGeoLive lightning presentation down to a 5
minute slot I have at FOSS4G Oceania, which I've found a worthy
exercise as it has forced me to be more concise and eloquent in word
selection, although I've needed to trim some slides.

A draft ready version is available here:

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1ivsGWB8Pet8sdgEXIr6eUH3HpuEQOv-OxqvJCmQG2IM/edit

Comments welcomed (so long as it doesn't lead to more words).

I'm currently storing presentation changes on a branch, and plan to
raise a pull request soon:

https://github.com/camerons/OSGeoLive-doc/tree/presentation
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