+1 both drafts look completely fine to me. > > > > > 2: In the final paragraph of [1], a statement is made: "However, as > Trying "(However, as already stated,
> > > > 11. In the "what are actions?" section [13] it now says "without > Taken it out into a separate section with 2 bullet lists: Best Regards, John Voice US 845-435-9470 BluePages Tivoli OSLC Lead - Show me the Scenario
