Mikk,
To make it a little more in keeping with English syntax I would add "a" in front of "surprisingly". Do you mean "binding" rather than "bounding"?
Thus,
Open Space Technology is a surprisingly simple high performance system,
binding passion with responsibility.

I would be inclined to substitute  "an elegantly" for "surprisingly".

Eric

Mikk Sarv wrote:

After attending Harrison's workshop in Helsinki we continued at the workshop in Estonia wrestling with short definition of OST - how to respond with less than 25 words, if you are asked, what is OST.

We resulted in 13 words, pursuing the new dimension of High Performance System:

Open Space Technology is surprisingly simple high performance system, bounding passion with responsibility.

Please help, if doesn't sound English/American ;-)

Mikk Sarv,

Estonia



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