Authors, Some comments on the draft.
1. The draft refers to the various use cases in the use case document in I-D.filsfils-rtgwg-segment-routing. It's useful to mention the section of the use case draft which is applicable for each reference instead of giving generic reference. 2. Section 7.2 LAN Adj-sid sub TLV: Based on the description of the text it appears that the LAN AdjSID Sub TLV can contain multiple neighbor-ID /SID pairs based on the nodes attached to a broadcast network. The TLV diagram should depict carrying multiple such pairs. "It is used to advertise a SID/Label for an adjacency to a non-DR node on a broadcast or NBMA network." Does the above statement mean only DR originates the LAN-Adj SID and advertises label to non-DR nodes? Shouldn't each node in broadcast link originate LAN adj-SID and advertise label to all other nodes on the link? 3. Adj-Sid sub TLV section 7.1: Description of V-flag mentions Prefix-SID, it should be changed to Adj-SID. 4. Section 4: Extended prefix range TLV is very similar to Extended prefix TLV just that it has additional range associated with it. I would think that we should have "route type" as in Extended prefix TLV instead of just having a bit indicating "inter area" Rgds Shraddha
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