Hi Acee, Alia, From: Alia Atlas [mailto:akat...@gmail.com] Sent: Friday, June 30, 2017 5:59 PM To: Acee Lindem (acee) Cc: DECRAENE Bruno IMT/OLN; OSPF List; draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OSPF] AD review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-03
Hi Acee, On Fri, Jun 30, 2017 at 11:52 AM, Acee Lindem (acee) <a...@cisco.com<mailto:a...@cisco.com>> wrote: Hi Alia, Bruno, From: OSPF <ospf-boun...@ietf.org<mailto:ospf-boun...@ietf.org>> on behalf of Alia Atlas <akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com>> Date: Friday, June 30, 2017 at 11:30 AM To: Bruno Decraene <bruno.decra...@orange.com<mailto:bruno.decra...@orange.com>> Cc: OSPF WG List <ospf@ietf.org<mailto:ospf@ietf.org>>, "draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org>" <draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org>> Subject: Re: [OSPF] AD review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-03 Hi Bruno, On Fri, Jun 30, 2017 at 8:31 AM, <bruno.decra...@orange.com<mailto:bruno.decra...@orange.com>> wrote: Hi Alia, More inline [Bruno2] From: Alia Atlas [mailto:akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com>] Sent: Thursday, June 29, 2017 11:09 PM To: DECRAENE Bruno IMT/OLN Cc: OSPF List; draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org>; Xuxiaohu Subject: Re: AD review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-03 Hi Bruno, Thanks for the updated draft - more in-line. On Mon, Jun 26, 2017 at 5:59 AM, <bruno.decra...@orange.com<mailto:bruno.decra...@orange.com>> wrote: Hi Alia, Many thanks for the useful review. -04 has just been published. I believe it address your first pass of comments. Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-04 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-04 Main changes: - aligning with I-D.ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps rather than RFC 5512. - adding 2 sub-TLV coming from I-D.ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps: IP QoS Field, UDP Destination Port. Note that the first one is currently called "IPv4 DS Field" in the IDR draft. I've commented on IDR that this is IPv4 specific with no IPv6 counterpart. [Alia] The text for the UDP Destination Port (Sec 6.6) is wrong - it's just copied from Sec 6.5. [Bruno2] thanks, fixed I agree with you on the need for the IP QoS field to represent both IPv6 as well as IPv4; it also just talks about the DS field - but that's 6 bits. Are the ECN bits included? That's a conversation for IDR. [Bruno2] agreed (that’s for IDR) Waiting for the resolution. We need the BGP and IGP draft to be aligned. - removed registry "IGP Tunnel Encapsulation Type" and pointing to existing registry "BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Type" - (editorial) Sub-TLV of the Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute are grouped in a dedicated section (§6) - clarification that for all but one, those sub-TLV are defined in I-D.ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps, from a syntax, semantic and usage standpoint. - color Sub-TLV better defined (as not aligned with the IDR draft) - added a section about the usage of the Tunnel Encapsulation attribute (§7) - a significant rule added: " A tunnel MUST NOT be used if there is no route toward the IP address specified in the Endpoint Sub-TLV or if the route is not advertised by the router advertising the Tunnel Encapsulation attribute advertising this tunnel. " Some follow up on some of your points that I had missed in previous answer: > From: Alia Atlas [mailto:akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com>] > Sent: Thursday, June 15, 2017 12:56 AM [...] > (does variable length fields based upon the allocated type cause issues for > OSPF sub-TLV parsing???) I guess that you are referring to " o Sub-TLV Length (1 or 2 octets): the total number of octets of the sub-TLV value field. The Sub-TLV Length field contains 1 octet if the Sub-TLV Type field contains a value in the range from 1-127. The Sub-TLV Length field contains two octets if the Sub-TLV Type field contains a value in the range from 128-254." https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06#section-2 The IGP draft does not use this. It uses a fixed 1-octet length field: " Sub-TLV Length (1 octet): Unsigned 8-bit integer indicating the total number of octets of the Sub-TLV value field." https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-04#section-5 [Alia] I think that there is still clarification on what to do if (in the future) a sub-TLV that used the 2-octet length couldn't fit into a 1-octet length. I know this is currently hypothetical, so all I'm looking for is a statement about the difference and that such sub-TLVs are not supported without further extensions. [Bruno2] There are 2 “Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Types” registries: - one for BGP, which allow length of 1 or 2 octets (as per the draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06 because RFC 5512 only allowed for 1 octet) - one for IGP, which allow length of 1 octet Even though it is unlikely to be required, can we just go with 2 octet type and length for the tunnel attribute Sub-TLVs consistent with the TLV format in RFC 7770? Seems like this would simplify things – I guess we are worried about IS-IS consistency? That works too & is a cleaner solution. I had forgotten about the sizes of sub-tlvs in RFC 7770. [Bruno] That work and we could align the IS-IS document with this. The cost is using extra bytes in the IGP in order to accommodate for hypothetical future usage (in particular RFC 5512 did not assume that this would be useful) But still, we wouldn’t have alignment with the BGP document… unless the BGP document is also changed. Would moving to 2 octets be ok for the whole WG? --Bruno Thank you, Alia Thanks, Acee For the IGP, there is no provision/future possibility to use a two-octets length sub-TLV. So yes, the length is limited, but this is not specific to this sub-TLV. All IGP/IETF/ISO…. TLVs share the same limitation that the size of the length field is predefined and fixed. So nothing new IMHO. The only specific thing with this document is the filiation with the BGP document. If BGP were to define a two-octets length sub-TLV, it could not be retro-fitted in the IGP. One option would be to split the information into multiple sub-TLVs, but this is still limited. Is this this relation with the BGP sub-TLV that you’d like to be highlighted? If so, I can propose a new section “6.7 Future sub-TLV draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps similarly defines Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs but IGP and BGP have separate IANA registries allowing for separate sub-TLV definitions. If the same information is to be advertised for both IGP and BGP tunnel encapsulation, it’s RECOMMENDED to use the same syntax, semantic and code point. However, it is to be noted that the "BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs" registry allows for sub-TLV with two octets of length, while the “IGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Types” registry only allows to octet of length. Hence the two-octets BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs won’t be able to be defined for IGP Tunnels. Eventually, their information may be split over multiple sub-TLVs.” Is this what you are looking for? Alternatively the IGP registry could also define such two lengths, but to be honest, I’m reluctant to introduce such a “hack” in IGP. I would fear bugs with the introduction of a type having a two-octet length, with possibly significant consequences in a link state IGP. BTW, I’ve just noticed that BGP and IGP registries have different names as the name of the BGP registry has changed since RFC 5512. I’m fixing this OLD: IGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Types NEW: IGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs [Alia] I thought the draft was now using the BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs?? This draft just needs a statement that says "In BGP, as defined in [draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps], Sub-TLVs with types 128-254 have a two-octet length field. In OSPF, there is no support for a two-octet length field; sub-TLVs in this range cannot be used in OSPF unless the value field's length is known to fit in one octet." > Semantics and behavior need to be specified - not just the encodings Agreed. Note however that the behavior is more complex in the BGP draft, because the Tunnel Attribute is attached to BGP routes, which can be of various SAFI with their own semantic and usage (e.g. GRT vs VPN/overlay case, labeled/unlabeled...) and their interaction with the different kind of tunnels (GRT vs VPN, labeled vs unlabeled). This is not the case in the IGP draft which only signals the tunnel itself (discovery, parameters). [Alia] Sure - Sec 7 helps a lot. What isn't clear though is how tunnels that require setup are handled. In Sec 5 of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06, I see "The tunnel type is supported (i.e., router R knows how to set up tunnels of that type, how to create the encapsulation header for tunnels of that type, etc.)" as part of the discussion of what is a "feasible" tunnel. Similar language would help in Sec 7. [Bruno2] Both IDR and OSPF drafts have the same text regarding tunnel setup: “ Note that some tunnel types may require the execution of an explicit tunnel setup protocol before they can be used for carrying data. Other tunnel types may not require any tunnel setup protocol.” As the IDR draft defines the IANA registry for encapsulation type, it also have the following sentence “Whenever a new Tunnel Type TLV is defined, the specification of that TLV must describe (or reference) the procedures for creating the encapsulation header used to forward packets through that tunnel type. » I don’t think that this is needed in the IGP draft since it does not define such registry. Since you specifically refer to a text in section 5 of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06, I think that for the ospf draft the related text is in section 7 and I’m proposing the following change OLD: The decision to use that tunnel, is driven by policy on the ingress router. NEW: The decision to use that tunnel is driven by the capability of the ingress router to support the encapsulation type and the policy on the ingress router. [Alia] That sounds good. [Alia] Finally, from a process perspective, I think that there has been sufficient technical change that another short WGLC is appropriate. Please do update the draft first. Then, we can do an IETF Last Call targeting an IESG telechat in August. [Bruno2] ok. Waiting for your feedback before uploading the new version. [Alia] Please do. Thanks, Regards, --Bruno Regards, Alia Thanks again for the careful review and the useful comments. Regards, --Bruno > From: Alia Atlas [mailto:akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com>] > > Sent: Tuesday, June 20, 2017 5:27 PM > > On Mon, Jun 19, 2017 at 9:19 PM, Xuxiaohu > <xuxia...@huawei.com<mailto:xuxia...@huawei.com>> wrote: > > > Hi Alia, > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot for your AD review. Please see our response inline. > > > > > > > > *发件人**:* Alia Atlas [mailto:akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com> > > <akat...@gmail.com<mailto:akat...@gmail.com>>] > > *发送时间**:* 2017年6月15日 6:56 > > *收件人**:* OSPF List; > > draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-...@ietf.org> > > *主题**:* AD review of draft-ietf-ospf-encapsulation-cap-03 > > > > > > > > As is customary, I have done my AD review of draft-ietf-ospf- > > encapsulation-cap-03. > > > > First, I would like to thank the authors - Xiaohu, Bruno, Robert, Luis, > > and Luay - for their work on this useful document. > > > > > > > > I do have a few concerns that need addressing before the draft can > > progress. > > > > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu] Many thanks for your useful comments. > > > > Following your comments, we believe it would be simpler and better to not > > create a new IANA registry for ”IGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Types” > > but rather reuse the existing BGP one: > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/ > > bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types > > > > Given that the sub-TLVs available depend on the tunnel type, I think this > makes sense. > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu] BTW when this OSPF extension has been defined, it has been > > modeled based on RFC 5512. However, as of today, the BGP extension is been > > redefined in draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps, sometimes. Which normative > > reference should be use? > > > > - as of today, RFC 5512 is probably the right one as > > draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps has not passed WG LC and may never be > > published as RFC (IDR requires 2 implementations. I think RFC 5512 has not > > been implemented hence we may question whether draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps > > will be…) > > > > - in some hypothetical future, draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps may obsolete > > RFC 5512 > > > > Judging from the two partial implementations in the IDR wiki, I'm not quite > as concerned. That said, are you certain that there aren't explanations > and behaviors that are clarified in draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps that > aren't in RFC 5512? Certainly, some of the tunnel types that were > mentioned in the OSPF registry are from the former. > > > > Major: > > > > > > > > 1) First, the draft talks about what information is sent - but nothing > > about how it is to be understood or used. That'd be ok if there were a > > clear reference to a document that discussed the related procedures. A > > quick scan of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06 seems that it may be the > > right place to start - but it's procedures are BGP-focused and while there > > are many similarities, there may be interesting differences as well. > > > > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu] We’ll clarify that the 3 sub-TLV (§5.1-§5.3) are > > normatively defined in RFC 5512, from a format, semantic and usage > > standpoint. And that there code point are allocated in respectively the > > following IANA registries: BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Tunnel Types, > > BGP Tunnel Encapsulation Attribute Sub-TLVs. As per you comment, we need to > > clarify the 5.4 color Sub-TLV. Proposed text: > > > > The Color Sub-TLV value is a 4-octet unsigned integer. Its semantic and > > usage are the same as the Color Value, from the Color Sub-TLV defined in > > RFC 5512 section 4.3 (*) > > > > > > > > For instance, for the Color sub-TLV, is the 4 byte color value expected to > > represent the same meaning in OSPF as in BGP? > > > > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu]Yes. > > > > > > > > Can a BGP route with a particular color extended community then have the > > OSPF tunnel to use selected from only those tunnels with the same color? > > > > > > > > What does the Color TLV mean in a purely OSPF context? > > > > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu] idem as in the IDR context. It’s a color used to define > > policy. The application using those tunnels, may use this color as an input > > for its policy when choosing the tunnel to use (or not use). > > > > We can add this text if needed. > > > > > Yes, I think that is needed. In BGP, since a route can have communities, > it is easy to just have a "must match color" rule (though one could picture > a community that means match-any-tunnel-but-this-color). For OSPF, if the > intention of the use for this information is an external application, that > needs to be clearly stated. > > There needs to be enough text so that two implementations can actually use > the functionality - not merely signal it - and that is generally what is > missing in the document. > > Sec 7 of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06 ("However, suppose that one of > > the TLVs in U2's Tunnel Encapsulation attribute contains the Color > > Sub-TLV. In that case, packet P SHOULD > > > > NOT be sent through the tunnel identified in that TLV, unless U1 is > > carrying the Color Extended Community that is identified in U2's > > Color Sub-TLV.") doesn't seem to strictly apply. > > > > > > > > [Bruno/Xiaohu] Would new clarification added above (*) be enough? If not, > > a priori, I’d rather improve the definition of section 5.4 defining this > > color sub-TLV, in order for it to generally apply to any text. (rather than > > trying to patch the specific above text from Sec 7) > > > > I would be happy for you to fix it where makes the most sense to you. My > review suffers from the usual issue of commenting mostly on what is there > in the order and location it is presented. > > > > Semantics and behavior need to be specified - not just the encodings, and > > that is all this draft currently has. > > > > > > > > > > > > 2) Sec 5.1 and Sec 5.2 refer to the format of the Encapsulation Sub-TLV > > and Protocol Sub-TLV coming from draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-06 - but > > that draft defines not merely the format, but allocates an IANA registry > > for additional sub-types that can appear and defines the format and > > contents of the sub-TLV based upon the tunnel type. I'm nearly certain > > that you mean that these sub-tlvs use not merely the same format (*does > > variable length fields based upon the allocated type cause issues for OSPF > > sub-TLV parsing???*) but can contain any values and sub-TLVs defined in > > the relevant IANA registry. As it is written now, there is no reference to > > the registry or ability to easily support more tunnel types in the future _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. 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