Eric,
Here are some notes I have accumulated so far for the July draft:
A) Section 6.2.1 should add "network byte-order" to the "idiosyncrasies"
of the language.
B) In 6.2.2, the 'relo_token' 32-bit value should be 0xD2454c4f not
0xC2454c4f.
C) In 6.2.2, the description for 'var_list_length' should be
"...following THREE length fields..."
D) In 6.2.3.1, the description for 'error_info' says "This MUST be empty
(zero length)
except as specified below." However, nothing in "below" explicitly
mention being used
in 'error_info'.
E) In 6.2.2.2, "ROUTE-LOG-RESPONSE" should be RESPONSE-ROUTE-LOG per 6.2.2.
F) Section 6.4.2.1.1 must clarify whether the ICE candidate string is
with or without
the prefix "candidate:" as defined in draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-19
section 15.1.
G) Suggestion: In Forwarding Header (6.2.2), move the 'overlay' or
'transaction_id' fields
next to each other, so that when computing the signature, both
fields can be fed to the
signing function in a single block instead of two separate ones.
Thanks
--Michael
Eric Rescorla wrote:
Folks,
What with the short time frame and there not being an editor
yet, the RELOAD author team made a final pass through the
document to have something to discuss in Dublin. We recognize
that none of these changes were vetted by the WG, so we'll
of course back any of them out that people object to. A summary
appears below:
- Changed it to have a draft-ietf- name
- Changed "Connect" to Attach"
- Added some text to make the first node work properly
- Restricted the number of node-ids in a certificate to
one.
- Added an options block to the forwarding header
- Clarified handling of replayed messages.
There are also a nunber of known open issues, which we'll
be starting threads on shortly.
Until the draft appears in the repository, you can find it at:
https://svn.resiprocate.org/rep/ietf-drafts/fluffy/draft-ietf-p2psip-reload.txt
Thanks,
-Ekr
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