Hi Bruce, Thanks for your comments. See inline.
>-----Original Message----- >From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] >On Behalf Of Bruce Lowekamp >Sent: Tuesday, July 28, 2009 4:55 PM >To: [email protected] >Subject: [P2PSIP] comments on >draft-matuszewski-p2psip-security-requirements-05 > >I thought this revision of the document was a significant >improvement and thank the authors for spending so much time >reorganizing and rewriting pieces of it. > >I liked the general discussion of issues. When it got into >the RELOAD-specific part I was less certain how to apply it. >It might be helpful if the draft uses RELOAD to refer to the >specific protocol and P2PSIP or even another term to discuss >general p2p communications system issues to avoid confusion. > Good suggestion. It will be done in the next revision. >This draft appears to have the wrong IPR declaration at the beginning. > Since it incorporates material that was contributed prior to >11/2008, it can't use this declaration. > We will correct it. >I still find the term "overlay base" confusing. > Bruce, here is the definition for P2P Overlay Base in this document. Could you please tell me what make you confused? P2P Overlay Base: A P2P Overlay Base includes all the Peers that participate in the p2p overlay. The P2P Overlay Base provides distributed storage and routing services to both peers and clients. >Again, depending on whether parts of the discussion are >intended to be general about p2p telecom or specific to RELOAD >and work in the p2psip working group, some of the discussion >and terms need to be updated. >For example, there is no separate protocol for peer vs client >communication (even though there is discussion of whether >additional methods are needed for client operation, I don't >believe anyone is arguing for separate protocols at this point). > I just noticed that. Sorry for our negligence when updating this document. We will correct it for the next version. Thanks, Haibin >Bruce >_______________________________________________ >P2PSIP mailing list >[email protected] >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip > _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
