Hi,

In the current -06 draft, the second bullet of 5.1.1 states,

  "If the entry is a Node-ID which belongs to this node..."

A peer may be responsible for a number of Resource-IDs but one and only
one Node-ID, its own.

The 3rd bullet talks about routing to clients, and 5.1.3 talks about
private IDs. Therefore, this 2nd bullet should only be about the top
Node-ID in the destination list equals peer's own Node-ID. I suggest
change the work "belongs" to "is equal", which matches the wording of
the 3rd bullet.

   o  If the entry is a Node-ID which is equal to this node, then ...

Also, the first sentence of section 5.1.2 seems to refer to the 3
bullets in section 5.1.1. It that is true, then:

  "If neither of the other two cases applies, then ..."

should be

  "If neither of the three cases applies, then ..."


--Michael

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