Hi,
1.here NP isn't neighbor peer but next peer,to see section 11, last
two line of page 118
"To populate its neighbor table, it needs the successor of AP,
NP."
2. I agree that the last Attach request is unwanted. Any other
explaintion for it?
3. I think the draft runs short of description about peer leaving
flow.
Further, there are two type peer leaving scenarioes, gentlest and
abrupt. The seconde one should be considered emphatically.
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Some comments:
Section 3.5.2 Joining, Leaving, and Maintenance Overview
Joining is discussed in depth, Leaving and Maintenance seem to be
missing.
Section 11, second message flow -- attach to neighbor peer
Just before the TLS arrow from JP to NP, there's an extra arrow labelled
'Attach' to the NP. Why is this necessary? Didn't JP already obtain NP's
ICE candidates in the preceding Attach exchange shown in the diagram?
There's little text about leaving an overlay. Section 9 'Chord Algorithm'
discusses it (9.8), but the algorithm- independent sections barely mention
it.
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