still working on these ...
On Jan 10, 2011, at 5:17 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote:
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> A.30. Section 5.5.4.1 "opaque config_data<0..2^24-1>"
>
> If a configuration document contains multiple configuration elements (and I
> guess multiple matching signature elements), then should not config_data been
> in
> fact structured the same way than kinds?, i.e. an XML fragment containing only
> the configuration element and the signature element for this overlay,
> extracted
> from the multiple configuration elements document?
>
> See also A.31 below.
>
> A.31. Section 1.1 'The file can contain multiple "configuration" elements..."
>
> This contradicts the RELAX NG grammar in section 10.1.1. In addition, should
> not configuration elements be structured as kind elements are, i.e. something
> like this:
>
> <overlay>
> <configuration-block>
> <configuration>...</configuration>
> <signature>...</signature>
> </configuration-block>
> <configuration-block>
> <configuration>...</configuration>
> <signature>...</signature>
> </configuration-block>
> </overlay>
>
> In this case, config_data would contain a XML configuration-block production
> (see A.31 above).
>
> A.32. Section 10.1 "root-cert: [...] there can be more than one root-cert
> element"
>
> This contradicts the RELAX NG grammar in section 10.1.1.
>
> A.33. Section 10.1 "enrollment-server: [...] there can be more than one
> enrollment-server element"
>
> This contradicts the RELAX NG grammar in section 10.1.1.
>
> A.34. Section 10.1 'multicast-bootstrap: [...] it has an attribute called
> "address" [...] and an attribute called "port"'
>
> This contradicts the RELAX NG grammar in section 10.1.1 (hostPort).
>
> A.35. Section 10.1.1 "parameter &= element required-kinds { kind-block* }"
>
> Because the text in section 10.1. says that "[i]nside each overlay element,
> the
> required-kinds element can also occur", I think it should be this instead:
>
> parameter &= element required-kinds { kind-block+ }?
>
> - --
> Marc Petit-Huguenin
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