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Some comments on this draft:

- - I found this draft difficult to read without reading [ReDIR] before.

- - Section 5: "In addition, the Node-ID MUST belong to one of the two 
intervals..."

"...one of the n intervals (n being the ReDIR tree branching factor)..."

Also the definition of the access control policy should be modified to work with
exists=FALSE items, i.e. items without namespace, level and node fields.

- - Section 8: redirBranchingFactor and redirRefreshPeriod

These two elements should be declared in an XML namespace (and the redundant
redir prefix can then be removed).

Also I think that these two elements should be inserted inside the kind element,
not inside the configuration element.

And finally (but it is a matter of taste) I find "redir-branching-factor" and
"redir-refresh-period" more readable.

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Marc Petit-Huguenin
Personal email: [email protected]
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Blog: http://blog.marc.petit-huguenin.org
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